Brief and sweet! I love it.
Thanks rekhan for reading and loving it!
This is wonderful! Felt like I was watching a movie. very thrilling & captivating.
I like how u summarize your poem; Because when the face I know is not the one I see,It strikes ice-cold fear right into the heart of me.Got me thinking of faces painted about Africa. Deep poem for me. Great work Misslyss!
Lol...I was looking forward to reading more but you put down is so complete! Oh love... is all I can say!
Very good work Prim. It depicts love & relationships in a different but true way. Nice work!
Beautiful poem Daddyz girl...describing such deep love in simple words.
To stay alone and have some 'me' time can be rejuvenating, but loneliness can kill u quick! Good poem with touchy emotions. God luck!
Please don't disappear from writing more poems. U don't have to be a poet coz this is great!
Lol growing up is your fear? Your fear is inevitable abby! This is a very creative poem & I love it. I will read & cram it! ;D
I looooove this poem. Depicts real life situations; with some people u grow close, others u feel lost. So true. Wishing u the best!
Thank you mosseso!
Thanks Survivalist for reading & up-voting!
Thanks Prim. Glad u like it!
What if I reckon...Fantasies that aren't real; Are the root cause of fear. This is a great piece of writing. I love the way its made me think about the what ifs. Keep it up!
Hongera Teddy & Don't worry, everyone knows Kenya ;D....I think. Niiice piece!
Thankiee you Manahil :)
Thanks Posh2. Lol don't laugh at my fear. Wishing u the best too ;)
Please tell me this is fictional. It is traumatizing for anyone to go through this. I just want to believe it's a fictional fear coz it really is scary.
I am here, no one else but I.Alone, afraid, empty, and sad: This is deep & would be my greatest fear too. Great piece natsume.
Fear not Sheelsdevi...for this is a wonderful masterpiece :). wishing u all the best!
Shadows here...there...everywhere. Very nice piece on what darkness can bring. I like how you've done it. All the best!
Thanks Kyra, am glad u like it. Thanks for the up-vote too!
Lol...dreams can be weird u know natsume; I just cross my fingers for some like this one never come true! Thanks 4 the up-vote :)
Haha...I guess it's my nightmare politely written. Thanks for the up-vote!
Aaaaw Nupur27...nicely put :) :) :). Thank u very for the up-vote. Wishing u the best too mate!
Haha, thank goodness for dentists! Thanks for the upvote. Wishing u the best!
Brief and sweet! I love it.