Very creepy! This was quite some creative thinking. Good work!
Thank youuuu Whispering Waters!
So bitter sweet. I can almost touch the emotions of the writer when this piece was being done! Good job.
This is a great story. A few grammatical/spelling errors but great all the same.
Thanks Joy for reading and the up vote. I loved your story too!
A sweet sorry with an unexpected end...kind of sad. I like it.
Very creative! Good luck n keep it up.
Thanks Velantra! Glad you enjoyed reading.
Thank goodness for dreams; at least one wakes up from nightmares! Its interesting to feel like you are narrating the story in person as someone listens.
Thanks nupur, I see you experienced the Halloween chill!!...lol
Lol...this is freaking interesting; was the main character dead all along? I love the twist in it.
Nice read, it was well narrated with a great climax.
Thanks Eagle77 for reading, enjoying and up voting my story!
I like the plot & enjoyed reading..it got a little familiar at some point:Maybe because I fear maize plantations- forests-spirits correlation. Kudos!
I love this phrase: 'The past pulls in me; the present startles me, in light of the fact that what's to come is demise'. Can I borrow your words someday? Good piece of writing!
Thanks for reading and up voting too.
Thanks ejay for reading & the upvote. I wished I could write more too but it is under 'very short story' category.
Aaaw thanks rekhanshiraghava! I really appreciate your sentiments on this and the up vote.
Wow... a sweet and compassionate little stranger that was! Your story gives me both sad and happy emotions. I enjoyed it!
Thanks for reading Sheelsdevi!
Oh she's a gold diga! Lol. Nice poem Emeh
Bullying is nasty. The bullies however have a root cause for their behavior & can change if listened to. I like your story.
This is really nice. I wanna read the continuation of your story!
Nicely written :)