Don't go away....

by Teddy Kimathi
So many times I have lost my poetry muse
It can’t be compared to missing your kiss
You are not an ordinary woman in my life
Going away will cut my heart like a knife
Always remember you are the reason I live
Everything in life makes sense because of your love
I know you have been hurt by my secrets
All my past has left me with regrets
You are the reason that I live today
Please, forgive me; let’s make a new day
A new beginning with you is all I want
You are the most wonderful woman I have ever met
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Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

August 1, 2015 - 14:43 niceeee :D
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

August 1, 2015 - 14:57 Thank you for your well wishes Manahil! ;-)
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

August 1, 2015 - 14:59 ofccc.. best of luck teddy :)
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

August 1, 2015 - 15:00 where r u from btw?
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

August 1, 2015 - 15:01 I am from Kenya in Africa.
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

August 1, 2015 - 15:02 i see. and ur profile says uve published ur poems and stuff rite?
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

August 1, 2015 - 15:03 Yes, I have.
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

August 1, 2015 - 15:04 cooolll o.o i see
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

August 1, 2015 - 15:06 Thanks! ;-) It's not easy though - it takes lots of practice to appear there....
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

August 1, 2015 - 15:07 god ure kinda scaring me.. but well i have a long way to goooo :P
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

August 1, 2015 - 15:18 Lol. Don't be scared. First, believe in yourself. Second, practice. You'll know your progress by joining sites like poetrysoup, which host contests, and anyone can comment on your work. If you realize you are doing good, submit your works to loads of literary sites. There is a journal I sent works five times, being rejected. The sixth time, a work of mine was accepted! ;-)
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

August 2, 2015 - 12:45 wow now thats a total boost up.. im gonna watch out for that site today surely.. tenks so much :)
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

August 2, 2015 - 14:07 You are very much welcome! *^_^*
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 1, 2015 - 14:44 So sweet and nicely done. Good luck :)
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

August 1, 2015 - 14:58 Thank you for your well wishes and enjoying my work Mahoobee! ;-)
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

June 10, 2017 - 10:46 Thank you so much for your continuous morale support Mahoobee!! *^__^* I don't know how I bounced your comment, sorry....
koyaai

koyaai

August 1, 2015 - 15:17 How should I put this. It feels like a lovestruck teenager wrote this piece because it feels so raw and real.
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

August 1, 2015 - 15:23 Thanks Koyaai. I can see you are so analytical......I took it in a teenagers' point of view! I remember in high school a guy took overdose of drugs, because his girlfriend had left him. That event changed my way of thinking about love, and what true love really is. My love poems were born from such observations.
koyaai

koyaai

August 1, 2015 - 16:06 That sounds like great material. Remember that being raw can be good or bad so try to identify when it's favorable or not.
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

August 1, 2015 - 16:17 True my friend. Wise words...
sheelsdevi

sheelsdevi

August 1, 2015 - 16:17 A very touching poem of getting in terms with the separation.nice work
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

August 1, 2015 - 16:19 Thank you for enjoying my work and commenting on it Sheelsdevi! ;-)
Vishnumayaa

Vishnumayaa

August 1, 2015 - 17:21 This poem is too touchy , romantic and I guess you have written something about a break - up to....anyways ALL THE BEST .
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

August 2, 2015 - 14:09 Thank you for enjoying my work and your well-wishes Vishnumayaa! ^_^
celestialmind

celestialmind

August 2, 2015 - 16:12 Hongera Teddy & Don't worry, everyone knows Kenya ;D....I think. Niiice piece!
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

August 3, 2015 - 07:38 Asante sana Celestialmind! :-) Hahaha..... You are right. Everyone knows Kenya. ;-)
Velantra

Velantra

October 6, 2015 - 15:22 Wow, I really like your work. It is like we are in the same "space - place". Feel like I know you. One question? Do you still have your muse?
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

October 6, 2015 - 15:58 Thanks for enjoying my work Velantra! :-) Sometimes intuitions fuse with writing. Yes, I still my muse...... *^_^*
purpletears

purpletears

July 29, 2016 - 15:49 So sweet! Nice one!
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

July 30, 2016 - 07:51 Thank you so much, Purpletears!! ;-)
pies11

pies11

October 1, 2019 - 22:21 Hello i am miss Brenda i have private discusion with you via at(piesbrenda106@gmail.com)

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