RUN RUN RUN …..

by mackdonnut
RUN RUN RUN …..
From an air tearing screeching brake, there was a halt
I woke from my solemn deep sleep and sought
A red killer eye has popped from the window pane
With a gun in his hand pointing us to be slain

The door was unlocked, poor daddy was drawn out
A bullet to the head to my mom who shouted out
Pity us, pity us, to the burglar I beg
But he seems has no ears to hear my pitiable bid

I crawled out fast to the tiny backdoor
With bullet shots I heard rumbling throughout the floor
Run fast, run fast, run fast as you can
Words I heard from the vicious killing man

Shall I die now or shall I live
God for all my sins please forgive
Run run run, run as fast as you can
That I heard from behind by the pursuing man

I am running I know, I am running it’s true
But my knee is shot and my joint has blew
My brain is running, my body is not moving
What should I do, where must I go

I cannot die, I cannot die
I’m still a young lad too soon to fly
Suddenly a white light flashes like lightning from the sky
A siren from near distant I heard has saved my life









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nupur27

nupur27

August 4, 2015 - 05:42 Good one mack!!!! I liked the way it leads till the end!!!
mackdonnut

mackdonnut

August 4, 2015 - 07:05 thanks nupur27.....
sheelsdevi

sheelsdevi

August 4, 2015 - 07:40 Death ..such an infinitesimal word..but the impact it has on human being is thunderous..but we all live with that positivity that it will not churn us off stealthily..although it often does often Fear of death, though unnecessary , is a truth . Nice poem .
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

August 4, 2015 - 12:32 well expressed.. enjoyed the entire ride and loved the ending ofccc... =D keepp upp donuttt :P
lizjay

lizjay

August 4, 2015 - 13:23 Fear of death, but the funny thing is that you can't see it when it's coming, and when it comes you can't run away.nice one
PriM

PriM

August 4, 2015 - 15:32 I believe more than the fear of dying, it's usually the thought of 'how' one will is the cause. Good work!Keep writing!
mackdonnut

mackdonnut

August 5, 2015 - 04:04 thanks prim......love the comment but still no matter the style death strike....we all fear....
mackdonnut

mackdonnut

August 5, 2015 - 04:50 thanks lizjay for the comment it's true death is a thief but research shows that a two individual at the same age with the same habit and vise do not die at the same time,simply because the other one cut a single smoke a day.....meaning he could have been dead along with the other but he has cheated death...see....death is a thief most people said but we can always change and cheat/live long.....death do not comes to us..we make our own death..and age is another thing but i believe. in the future by genetic complementation and enhance suitable mutation. we can conquer death....who knows guys...heheheheheheh
celestialmind

celestialmind

August 5, 2015 - 12:26 This is wonderful! Felt like I was watching a movie. very thrilling & captivating.
Sharmishtha Shenoy

Sharmishtha Shenoy

October 31, 2015 - 09:54 Deep thoughts on death! By the way like your profile picture!
Susan Jacob

Susan Jacob

November 10, 2015 - 19:31 Good Work Mack!! I loved the way you took it till the last word rhyming impeccably
mackdonnut

mackdonnut

November 13, 2015 - 14:07 thanks sharmistha and whispering waters

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