Weeping heart

Till so many days i just had fear, closer i will come to you i will go far from u dear,

Moments i spent with you are so divine and beautiful, as if i am living them since year.

Moment i see you, come close to you, my stupid dream comes to an end and i realize how far you appear.

I tried too many things, given my heart out, did every bit to make you smile, just to listen from you that you want me to be near.

But my fear has come true, with weeping heart i just want to say please please don't let me disappear.

Hope my fear will come to an end again,
I wont have eyes with tear again,
I wish i could spent years with you again,
and you will say please please don't disappear, i want you to be near again.
By:- Rj- Kinder soul

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rj kinder soul

August 3, 2015 - 18:59 Guys... I m not a poet, but I just give my feelings some words to get expressed. Please give your precious feedbacks..

nupur27

August 3, 2015 - 20:19 Hey!! Are u posting this for the poetry competition?? Then you should select the lyric poem competition un that!!! The. Only, it will ne counted!! Btw!! I liked the poem:):)

rj kinder soul

August 3, 2015 - 20:31 Thank you for your kind appreciation...n now I have put the poem for Competition...but ultimately appreciation will matter more than prizes..:-) :-)

nupur27

August 3, 2015 - 20:32 Your welcome!!! :);):) All the best!!! Check my entry even!! :):)

rj kinder soul

August 3, 2015 - 20:42 Omg....great great...now I certainly know, after reading your poem.. Prizes are so far, As if I m watching the star, I must run from here r heir a car, Before my heart get wounded with scar, I know I not even at par, N u with this poem already a star..:-) :-) :-)

sheelsdevi

August 4, 2015 - 06:25 It is a poem on the fear of loosing your loved one or being discarded.. More than physical pain it is an emotional one . A nice poem on the cravings of a heart in love.

mackdonnut

August 4, 2015 - 06:36 a poem about loosing someone....the dramatic essentials, its epic...

Manahill Naik

August 4, 2015 - 13:16 short and sweet :)

PriM

August 4, 2015 - 15:43 You feelings are deep and I really liked the ending from @hope my fear will come to an end again.....Very good ending!!! Though, if I could constructively correct- I think your beginning lines were a bit confusing for me....@Till so many days i just had fear, closer i will come to you i will go far from u dear,......Instead--Many days I had feared, the closer I come to you, the farther you are, A year of moments with you so divine and beautiful by far...so forth!!! Just like your last 4 impacting lines!!!