hahaha..what a true replication of a woman's desire! The greed to look young and beautiful...

Aww...thank you sweety..Part 3 wil be on hold for now...busy at work...

hahaha...alright..Part 3 will be out soon ;)

:) thank you dear

Nicely written :)

Oh come on!! Reveal the mystery already!! Hahahaha...love the suspense! Keep it up... Awaiting for part III :D :D

Oh..ok...waiting for the 2nd part ;)

Can't wait for part II!! You have aroused my curiosity! Out of body experience? Good job!

hahaha...this is so cute... =) =)

This is so disturbing...and awesomely written! Loved it ;)

Aww....you are welcome dear :) Glad she met you :D :D

Reading more helps in improving your grammar..but continue writing..enjoying ur vivid imagination :)

Aww... a really sad story!! I guess she learned a lesson on kindness now! Great job! Keep on writing! =)

Loved it! Enjoyed it...Continue writing... :)

Beautifully written n narrated. Surely she would have been disappointed to have been welcomed with such negativity.. But glad she realized the world has much more to offer :) Good job. Hoping for more from you... <3

Dude...are you a gamer? I felt like I was absorbed into the story. Well played! :)

hehe. thanks for the advice! :)

haha...thank you...still contemplating on the plot :P Will be releasing it soon :)

haha...planning to make this safe for general reading ;)

One word: WOW! Loved it! <3 <3

this breaks my heart! But we all know, that if a couple gets a baby girl, they are truly blessed! *wink *wink* Beautiful story girl...keep writing.

Adorable. :) Everyday is a new lesson and glad to know you enjoy studies... Keep up writing..

Such an adorable and innocent story! Loved it so much!! :)

haha...As they say...your emotions are reflected thru your writing ;) No..it is just that I have been reading up too many horror and tragedy stories and my head is full of that.. Should start reading some fantasy soon ;)

Too soon to judge... ;)

Cool ending ;)

Yeay! Thank youuuuu..... :) Glad to have positive feedback