I'm so sorry to hear that posh, and I admire you for being so brave to write it all out. I do hope that it could help to heal you and that I/we could be of help as well. God bless you!

Somehow I agree with koyaai, we have to leave the people thinking and finding out what happened. But I also agree that this is good, though I like you best with the short stories :D Still a good job diane :D

Very creative nupur :) you've summed up your fears in one poem..good job!

I love it! Well-written and the details are superb..good job koyaai :D

Haha, yeah right...

Yhup...been away for a long while..I wasn't able to join the second competition

So beautifully-written, the emotion seems to spring out from the story that it was able to touch my heart..good job :)

Wow, I'm so glad I am :D hahaha... You're welcome abby!cheers!

Hahaha...thank you mahoobee :D

Hahahaha! thank you so much!and happy 18 in advance to you too :D

hahaha....thank you!im gonna change it already!haha...miss you all little sisters!

you're welcome :))

Just so heart-breaking... great job!

Nicely written :)) I'm not a fan of romance stories here and I have read stories like this before, but I particularly liked this one...you've just poured out so much emotion here. Good job!

Hahaha, chickie chick is just so cute! :))

thank you so much dear Abby :D

Except for some minor grammar issues, you really took me with the emotion in your poem. Whatever you are going through, you certainly can overcome it because of your spirit! Keep going and keep on writing... :)

Hmmm yeah...the death was kinda peaceful. But according to a famous line I've heard, 'A crime wouldn't be solved with another crime'. At least he decided to end his life himself :) And yes, the writing style was so good! Keep it up chingrify!

haha..yeah right!

You're welcome, you deserve it :D Keep on writing!

Such a brilliant work sheelsdevi! Keep on writing!

So beautifull written, touching!...and from the eyes of a dragon fly at that! Great work! Keep it up and welcome to Typotic :D

Yeah, me too, vish is just 12, manahil 14, all you younger people are writing things like this! When I was that age, I was just enjoying the comforts of childhood, but you all are so aware of what's happening around you. Nice one vish!

Haha..thanks for the 'FHC' thing...but I don't really have a wedding to plan for! hahaha... You people will the first to know if there is! :D :D

haha...really??! I wish I even have a boyfriend to plan the wedding with! haha :D I got really busy these past days, and I missed you all too!

Just as I thought! I just think you can put more emotions in your story...like the emotions of Dan or Jon about the killings. But overall, I loved the story, I love crime stories :D Keep up the work, keep writing!

Good god :D hahaha...