I made this poem to express my feelings, and I wanna shout to the whole world that I will never ever give up. no matter how hard the situation that I've encountered
A fat girl who got bullied, depressed finally got her life together for a year. And she finally proofed it to her best friend who always picked on her every single day about something that she just realised that day.
a man met with an accident, all he remember is his wife and not her mistress..... story revolves around love, despair, divorce.....
Wake up! We are in a mysterious world of creation
We even full of questions why we are here
Why there’s sun and the moon and air and everything we sees is a miracle...
3 COMMENTS
manelyn
June 5, 2015 - 17:04 Except for some minor grammar issues, you really took me with the emotion in your poem. Whatever you are going through, you certainly can overcome it because of your spirit! Keep going and keep on writing... :)Icadz
June 6, 2015 - 03:54 Thank you, and God BlessManahill Naik
July 30, 2015 - 13:05 i completely agree with manelyn.. some minimal grammar probs but still u instilled loads of emotion in it :D keep up