Ahh, ejay, I am soooo sorry. Did she see a doctor, do you have medication for her? she must stay in bed. she surely has pneumonia, it can be very, very dangerous. she must stay in bed and not go out. she must rest. usually if some one has pneumonia they are in hospital. I pray for you my friend. xxxxxxx hugs and kisses

thanks for the up vote, I appreciate it. read my halloween story as well and keep voting xx

thank you so, so, much and thank you for the vote. xxxxxx

this is beautiful, well written indeed! lovely ejay

It is great to love like that, hope you fix your pc soon.

This is very beautiful, you are lucky to have such a great dad.

Thank you very much, it means a lot to me, she was a kind and lovely person.

Thank you very much, read my halloween story and vote!!!!!!

Yes, that is true, and I have a lot of unwelcome guests at the moment....... :-( but I believe we have to keep on smiling :-) great stuff ejay xx

Thanks, i'm sooooooo glad to hear that......

Hmmmmm, so Mr. horror does have a different side? It's not all guts, blood and gory...........

You caught 106 of reads up to now!!!!! hahahahaha Please don't take my earnings!!!! hahahahaha I will be back......... boooooooo I'm like you and Mr. "scary - " that freaked me out. .........

Thanks, much appreciated!!!

You said hope we get the poem, did you mean understand it? Or were you referring to a person? Don't make me feel blond and stupid. :-(.....:-) Joking!!!!!

My husbands daughter and son from his first marriage needs to read this. They have a new stepdad and they do not have any respect for him, it is mean. He is a good person. Like you say: "we begin to pay respects from home". I am glad that they do not life with us.

I am confused as well, did the car hit him in the end? or did some one else also hit him with a stick?

We give up to quickly, so true.... good ejay !

I got it, I got it!!!!!! Yeah! Great stuff....

Ejay, that is absolutely beautiful, I can just imagine you sitting there. :-()

I would not read this in the night either, but didn't some one play a joke on you? Still a great scary story. I would left right there, run like hell. I cannot fight something I cannot see.... hahahaha

a compliment indeed....

The way you describe the terror is good. like every one said: a little bit more, because you start to get curious and then it stops...

It is a remarkable story line. I am not a person for bad comments ever, I rather just say nothing, but you may look at the right use of your synonyms. (I mean it in a good way) :-)

It totally freaks me out, if it was any longer I would stop reading.......it scares me.....:-)

Very good writing, perfect English. well done, a good story, and I wonder how she got out of there?

I was sitting here reading your story, waiting, to see, that Billy is actually Tim. I would not speak either again. I would faint anyway, hit my head and die as well and life happily ever after with mean Mrs. Cooper!!!

FOR EVERY ONE WHO UPVOTED MY POST; THANK YOU GUYS/GIRLS :-)