Upgrade

by FieNd
Upgrade was made

new structure was laid

It took me too long

almost everything went wrong

But now poems get paid

the money they made

I really can't write

so I'll stop, mosquito bite.

I'd like to thank everybody who wasted their time reading the above!

Spaceship!!!
Let others and the author know if you liked it
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Mahoobee

Mahoobee

June 26, 2015 - 01:46 Woah!!! Nice Fie :D Nicely written.
FieNd

FieNd

June 26, 2015 - 02:03 Hahahhaa
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

June 26, 2015 - 12:36 I agree with manahil though :D
FieNd

FieNd

June 26, 2015 - 12:36 Me too!
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

June 26, 2015 - 12:39 Though what's poem get paid part about??
FieNd

FieNd

June 26, 2015 - 12:40 I didn't know what to write so it actually makes no sense. Had to test if everything is working...
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

June 26, 2015 - 12:44 Oh :D
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

June 26, 2015 - 11:47 Whaaaa? mosquito bites?? u really are weird xD
FieNd

FieNd

June 26, 2015 - 12:05 Indeed...
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

June 26, 2015 - 12:09 indeed pfft.. makes me uncomfortable :?
FieNd

FieNd

June 26, 2015 - 12:11 Hahahah, why is that?
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

June 26, 2015 - 12:13 i dunno.. sometimes ppl talk weir and then leaves me wondering.. how can someone ever come up with something that awkward :P
FieNd

FieNd

June 26, 2015 - 12:15 I simply agreed with me being weird :D
abbywookie

abbywookie

June 26, 2015 - 12:06 MOSQUITO BITES LMFAO HAHAHAHAHHA OWHHHHH :D i KNOW the long haha is redundant but it IS that funny. um, spaceship!!! hahahaha :D
FieNd

FieNd

June 26, 2015 - 12:08 :D
Vishnumayaa

Vishnumayaa

June 26, 2015 - 13:34 FieNd ....., I guess the sun shone in west today....or maybe there is gonna be a cyclone today ...:O U wrote a poem... well, its good , keep doing it ....and keep it up bye, for now
FieNd

FieNd

June 28, 2015 - 13:18 Haha, the poem was only a joke Vish :D
Vishnumayaa

Vishnumayaa

July 2, 2015 - 18:58 I know that the poem was a foul joke But I thought that by saying that you would cultivate a habit of writing
FieNd

FieNd

July 2, 2015 - 19:05 :D
MilaChaNn

MilaChaNn

July 9, 2015 - 20:06 I like the rhyming bits (๑¯∀¯๑)
FieNd

FieNd

July 9, 2015 - 20:16 Haha, thanks!
MilaChaNn

MilaChaNn

July 9, 2015 - 20:39 Ur welcomeeeee ╰(*°▽°*)╯
FieNd

FieNd

July 9, 2015 - 21:24 :D, do you also have one of those keyboards with all those funny smileys on them :P?
MilaChaNn

MilaChaNn

July 10, 2015 - 01:32 Kuhuhuhuhu Awwwwwwie cuteeeee (ღ˘⌣˘ღ) Yeashhhhh! I like cute stuffff so u may find me using them alottttt (p≧w≦q) Don't chuuu think they r cute???? OvO)? Oooooh btw a lil help hereeee if chuuu don't mindddddd!!!! *pouts* I wanna start a seriesssssss ⊙﹏⊙ Do ppl go for that hereeee???? (๑´ㅂ`๑)
FieNd

FieNd

July 10, 2015 - 02:28 Lol, yeah sure! There isn't really a system for it but you can write the chapter numbers either in the titles or the description and keep using the same tag for the series so that they can later be found on the same page!
MilaChaNn

MilaChaNn

July 10, 2015 - 12:18 Oooooohh goooodie (。・∀・)ノ゙ Fine with meeeee Thankiesssss OwO)/
sheelsdevi

sheelsdevi

July 31, 2015 - 20:05 Haha..it did make me laugh with its paradigm of nonsensical notions...
Dahmie

Dahmie

August 5, 2015 - 18:40 nice one.... i find it funny also
crystal123

crystal123

August 6, 2015 - 10:09 hi FieNd nicely written !!! love it :)<3,<3
purpletears

purpletears

September 20, 2015 - 01:00 lmao.. quite good :)
samewriter

samewriter

October 6, 2015 - 04:34 Hi Fiend, it's been a while. I have concern and I don't know how to catch your attention. I hope this will work. It is a about something on the publishing rules, please check it. :) "PS: If there other places where you have published the same thing we might ask you to prove that you to prove that it's yours."
FieNd

FieNd

October 6, 2015 - 23:01 Hi! What exactly is your question? You can always use the contact form to contact me!
Velantra

Velantra

October 22, 2015 - 17:11 You caught 106 of reads up to now!!!!! hahahahaha Please don't take my earnings!!!! hahahahaha I will be back......... boooooooo I'm like you and Mr. "scary - " that freaked me out. .........
Velantra

Velantra

November 3, 2015 - 08:20 How do we up vote a post? just by reading it? if you add it to your favourites list? or if we click the little hand? sorry for asking..... do not laugh........ i told you, I will haunt you...... and b.t.w sorry to veil of midnight "not a he....."
Sharmishtha Shenoy

Sharmishtha Shenoy

October 25, 2015 - 06:51 Lol good one . Absolute nonsense
Velantra

Velantra

November 21, 2015 - 14:08 Helloooooooo, camera, action! Ha, no camera. Me: Velantra: V E L A N T R A ....have a great idea for a competition.......blah blah blah beblah....... will email this to the: contact us? Us?????
FieNd

FieNd

November 21, 2015 - 16:30 Yes, us! It's me myself and I. I have 3 personalities! Go ahead!
Velantra

Velantra

January 2, 2016 - 20:19 Me, myself and I!! HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope it will be a good one for all of us :-) ( including crazy people, me........ )
FieNd

FieNd

January 4, 2016 - 13:10 Haha! Thank you Velantra!
pies11

pies11

October 2, 2019 - 14:22 Hello i am miss Brenda i have private discusion with you via at(piesbrenda106@gmail.com)

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