Wise little poem. Very true :-)

My thought process exactly! :-)

Nice :-)

Sad... why does God create such unstable mothers? By the way is it a true story?

Aren't you suffocated..... After each question mark the sentence should start in capital. Also other parts, when you are starting a new sentence, you forget to start with capital letter. Otherwise well written :-)

Lovely!

Thanks Manahill Naik :-). Love you.

Maybe the story can be continued? :-)

waiting for the next part

Chemistry between mother and daughter nicely done using the metaphor of the storm. Lovely!

You are getting better and better with every saga :-)

Good beginning

Yes - so true - we do live in a hypocritical society

Yes - my son and husband overthinks all the time. Drives me crazy :-)

Hi David How are you ? :-) What book did you publish lately? :-)

Does God exist? Sometimes I feel He does - sometimes I think there is no such thing. Steven Hawkins says God does not exist. But sometimes believing in God is more comforting.

forget the person when they are breathing. and miss them when they are dead... So pathetic yet so true ....

Whatever it is - I agree that white lies are good for the soul, if they are used to heal someone

Great one - very unusual combination of poem and story. Loved it :-)

Very true

Hmmm... scary... will think twice before sinning.... :-)

Very lyrical

Brought a smile to my face.

Ha ha - is this your story?

Next?

Life is a echo. What you give you get back :-)

figured someday her prince charming would find the glass slippers she had scattered around the world for him It's beautiful Rekha