Heavy caskets
April 29, 2017 April 29, 2017

Heavy caskets

Shortest poem I've ever written. \('_')/

Casket 1 dark 24 guide 1 light 34 sins 1

Heavy caskets

by Manahill Naik
Don't forget
Never forget
Don't pretend
Never pretend
Have not you been made aware?
Sins and the darkness you spread
Burdens the casket.
*
Walk over
The detritus of broken souls
Don't you think,
The rustling leaves haven't seen you,
Scar the trees
And when you planted grimy deeds
Don't you suppose,
The soil has been berefted of conciousness
It has heard
It has seen
The soil can hold grudges
As well as you can

*
Fear
For everything you broke
Awaits.
*
Have not you been made aware?
There's no one to carry the sinned caskets
There's no one to bury the sinned caskets
Now that you've been made aware,
Would you walk toward the light?


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Sharmishtha Shenoy

Sharmishtha Shenoy

 April 30, 2017 - 18:19 Hmmm... scary... will think twice before sinning.... :-)
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

 May 1, 2017 - 11:48 Haha so I've accomplished my goal with this poem. Thankyou for your time sharmishtha.
Jack50rko

Jack50rko

 April 30, 2017 - 22:02 I'm speechless. I guess you can write some dark poems too apparently :D
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

 May 1, 2017 - 11:49 Inspirations I get from YOUR dark poems. :-p
pies11

pies11

 October 1, 2019 - 19:50 Hello i am miss Brenda i have private discusion with you via at(piesbrenda106@gmail.com)

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