whoaaa nice.. gives me the feel of rap :D

whoahhh beautifull :)

haha i see.. really wonderful piece :D

impeccable dudE :D

wow this was just so beautifull.. guess someof us have been thru this.. i bet its freaking painful :/

okay this is like the end.. too much for me to handle.. tenku sooo very much to make me THIS happy.. apure boost up :D tenku again :D <3

buhahah ikr :D

a nice attempt.. haha and it surely has a nice animeish feel! you should concentrate on you grammar a little.. a few minor faults.. besides, adding a little spice and details will help good luck :)

beautiful indeed <3

whoa whoa fanfiction eh?? im so looking forward to chapter two.. curious me :D

ahan id love it :D

well written :) a nice lesson <3

hahaha lol yeah.. weve got a wide range of novels :D i admit im lucky fer that.. When mostly kids back in my school dont give a damn about it.. they just need an erotic novel to discuss and squeal at to pass their time :P :P :D

oohhh goodie then! all set :D

DONT TELL ME ALL OF US ARE FRICKIN TOMBOYS COS ITS ME TOOOOO :D

this was so frickin so frickin beautiful and well written u have no idea.. i was hooked the whole time and really wanted more.. :D

lol :D :D creative as in :P

hahah this was fun and a nice way to convert an article in a story keep uppp nupur :)

beautiful :)

hahahhahaha one word HILARIOUS.. god so creatively impressive :D keep upppp <3

hahaha i dint know it was a young adults novel when I chose it from my schools library and brought it home.. but its kinda worth reading superb :D

heyyy i was just currently reading that remarkable novel called hush hush bout a fallen angel and im just so loving it and then u wrote this remarkable poem and its such a nyc feeling-- wait whats with the long talking.. its just one superb writing :D keep up <3

hahah sure thng.. just keep on writing :D we are here to appreciate the deserving :)

this is just so impeccably and rarely beautiful u have no idea... impressive for many ppl, an inspiration for many writers and probably relative to many lives... the way u describe ur beautiful memories stirring well with those emotions that casted over me as I read further,, good work and keep upp :) <3 <3

very very impressive :)

most welcome :D

well written :)