thanks sharmistha and whispering waters

thanks much to all who reads my story much appreciated guys love much ya all!!!

thanks manahil

thanks all guys

thanks sharmishtha

a nice written piece kinda poetic but still the story rolls

sweet story yet fun more of this galaxy great one

the last part really took my breath naughty narration nice

the story is practical but it still gives me shivers

slow start but the ascensionof the story really tickles

nightmares always not good the story transition is great and flawless

scary and the twist of the story was awesome!!!

i've seen real caught on cam events like this always gives me chill...

the ending twist was fantastic a boy that kills i've watched a few but this is one kind..

its kinda predictable but still the story gives me chill i like it !!!

thanks lizjay for the comment it's true death is a thief but research shows that a two individual at the same age with the same habit and vise do not die at the same time,simply because the other one cut a single smoke a day.....meaning he could have been dead along with the other but he has cheated death...see....death is a thief most people said but we can always change and cheat/live long.....death do not comes to us..we make our own death..and age is another thing but i believe. in the future by genetic complementation and enhance suitable mutation. we can conquer death....who knows guys...heheheheheheh

thanks prim......love the comment but still no matter the style death strike....we all fear....

thanks nupur27.....

in case a true story...let us be more responsible in taking care of our children,,,blame not the child for he is innocent, blame yourself...

a vacation to therapy you say....in case your poem is your story...i think you should...seek help...not all men are bad some too are loving, caring and a knight when you're down....good poem ...

growing up that is....nice one....you nailed it...

killer thoughts so as thoughts can kill.....awesome...

well, life is full chances....keep grabbing fella...good one..

thispoem rocks....keep rockin'...

a practical expression of fear....cool

a poem about loosing someone....the dramatic essentials, its epic...

upvote....great one....the dynamic of lines are amazing......rock 'n roll to the world...