THE BRIDGE

by mackdonnut
THE BRIDGE

Bridgette, Harold, Kevin and Mary are adventure addicts. They have the motto “Life is a Trip, Trip your Life”.
Today, the trippers will celebrate Halloween by making it before midnight to the “Crying Soul Temple” in the northern barren forest acreage in China. Bridgette has read about the tale that the bridge going to the temple only appears during a lunar eclipse Halloween that will happen tonight after more than 500 years. And that anybody has not make it to the temple yet or make it but never returned.
This is the kind of adrenaline pump the group is searching for, when they don’t know what will happen next.
Hours of hiking, trekking through heavy shrubs and century old giant trees, rappelling a spiky rock mountain until they reach a very strong current stream with a deadly waterfall end. Harold insisted for another route but Bridgette strongly claim that the waterfall is the only way going to the bridge. They have to jump off the fall to reach the bridge going to the temple.
Moments later, with fear yet excitement of this new challenge the group decided to jump off from the waterfall cliff together. And they did.
Amazed and shock, they end up not into a water flow but a foggy bridge. The boys laugh hard in astonishment and the girls shook heads. They could not believe what the hell just happen. But hey, this is what they always wanted, the thrill and the overwhelming rush of shock and the tease to what will happen next.
The trippers proceeded, while celebrating their initial success of finally make it to the mysterious bridge. The bridge is wide, unbelievably cold and foggy that whatever is ahead of them is too hard to foreseen, so the trippers decided to stay close as possible. Moments pass by, they heard a very strong shrill voice from nowhere to tell. It’s like a dinosaur roaring hard but a bit off that somehow you could also think it could be some sort of an unknown animal.
The journey people continues when suddenly they heard a screeching break and a big blow. They run fast forward to see what’s ahead. A school bus filled with children is half swinging off the bridge. The children are crying screaming for help. The shocked group knowing nobody supposedly to be there except them run fast to fetch the children off the bus. Kevin pulled one child from the left window but when he was about to totally pull off the kid, Kevin saw the kid has no half body down and hefty blood is dripping off and sprouting all over his body and face. He freaked out, shouted and back off dropping the kid. Mary and Harold who was holding the back part of the bus asked the kids to slowly come off through the back window, bunch of kids slowly crawl towards the back window and while the two were holding the bus, the kids literally melted, burning and parts of the children’s body are falling down towards them. They both shouted and run off bump over to the running Kevin. While Bridgette tends to treat the almost out of breath kid that first escape from the bus, but while pressing the open wound, her hand was slowly drew down, the kid’s wound widen and big intestines comes out of the kid with overflowing blood. Bridgette back off, run and bump over with Kevin, Mary and Harold. The group run forward fast as they can but the burning, melting kids shouting for help run after them.
Minutes later, they can hear nothing, looks like the kids have vanished. The fog gets thicker and they can’t see what even a couple meters away is. They were running out of breath so they stop. When two kids suddenly appears behind them asking for help. They freaked out pushing the kids when a demon like tail has pierce into one of the kid’s body and blood shred all over. The second was eaten by a monster like animal that human has never seen.

They run fast as they could yet when they take a halt to breathe, Kevin’s head was snatched off then another animal ate his entire body. They back off to run but a strong blow of the monster’s tail has sliced Mary’s body in half, then ate it. Harold and Bridgette run forward when a tail has caught Harold’s legs. He dropped to the ground holding Bridgette’s hand but the tail crawl up to his hips and cut Harold in half down.
Bridgette tilt her head and saw light ahead. She thought, this could be the temple. She run as fast as her feet could carry her, but as she gets closer, it was the end of the bridge and the light she saw were a river of souls screaming hard and burning. It was then she realized the “Crying Soul Temple” is not a temple.
The out of this world creature were running fast towards Bridgette. She has two options, should she let the monsters feast her body or should she dive into the end of the bridge, THE INFERNO……….
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Sharmishtha Shenoy

Sharmishtha Shenoy

October 31, 2015 - 11:01 Horrible!
mackdonnut

mackdonnut

October 31, 2015 - 11:13 thanks sharmishtha
Joy

Joy

October 31, 2015 - 13:29 Gross but imaginative. ...
sheelsdevi

sheelsdevi

October 31, 2015 - 13:54 The inferno sounds a better option..it was grotesque. .what an imagination. .good in a perverted way.
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

October 31, 2015 - 18:47 ooohh exciting donut!! :D good work keep up!
mackdonnut

mackdonnut

November 4, 2015 - 12:56 thanks manahil
Lea Ebio

Lea Ebio

November 1, 2015 - 13:19 true horror and suspense! great imagination...and great work...awesome writing!
mackdonnut

mackdonnut

November 4, 2015 - 11:32 thanks all guys
mackdonnut

mackdonnut

November 4, 2015 - 12:59 thanks much to all who reads my story much appreciated guys love much ya all!!!

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