Thank you. I just need to improve my bad grammar. Thanks for taking your time reading this. Hopefully I'll be back writing soon.

Thanks. Just a rough story with many typos.

Omg I love this! Written with passion and every paragraphs has a very deep meaning to it. Very well done!

But he's your president right? I think nobody wants to commit crime after this, seeing what he had done to those who disobey. Which is a good thing.

Thank you Sharmy for reading this simple work. Appreciate it very much. You have a good day.

Thank you for reading this Teddy. I appreciate it.

Maybe this comment is way too complicative lol. Is there such word?

Thank you. I hope you enjoyed.

What happened? You got chased? 0.o

You're really good at writing story setting up in the world of sport. I suck at that. I'm impressed. Well done.

I wanted the ending to be as savaged as possible. Lol.

Thank you for your time reading this. Appreciate it. One more chapter to the conclusion then it'll be over. Soon.

Soon. Thanks for the up vote S!

Thank you for your support. I appreciate it.

What do you mean? It's not completed yet.

Find out on the next episode of . . . . . Game of Throne! Lol. =p

Thanks for spotting that out friend. What word should I replace it with? Any suggestion?

It actually helps me from getting stuck. I mean like running out of ideas. So by writing different stories at one times, it makes my brain keeps running. Lucky am not alone.

I can't help but laugh it off on the first phrase.That's funny! But I get what you mean! Lmao.

So, so, so very TRUE!

I can't help but writing different stories at one time. Is that an addiction?

Thank you S. I'm trying to learn and try different style of writings. Reading also helps. Am uploading the final part just about now,

I know I will. You let me know when the book is out. I need to learn more about some of your region histories.

This is so heart breaking. I'm ashamed of my fellow species.

Thanks a bunch D. You are VERY welcomed! Sorry for late reply, been kind of busy.

Interesting. Is this somewhat a retelling of fairy tale with a little bit touch of scifi? This is for younger readers which falls into middle grade category. Keep it up.

I like this . . . I could smell crime, thriller and mystery here. Probably! I don't know yet! You're stepping up your game D. Well done.