Thank you, R

Hi, Sharmishtha, So glad you appreciate this story. Thanks

Thank you, S.

Thanks D, for your comment and upvote. Your observation is astonishing. Thanks.

so ghastly. They said a mad man is more intelligent than a drunkard. Nice piece D.

Thank you D, for your comment and up-vote. It's our heart felt prayer.

Hello, Naik, nice hearing you come out from sabbatical within your thoughts to our hearing.

Hi Val, You almost got me spinning with this poem. It's a strong one.

I call it the bubble burst. When the bubble burst, all closely knitted molecule will fly to their various destination. It is the way of life.

Hi, This a good one. it reminds me of a story where a king was instructed to kill and another king but he took pity on him and had to forfeit his throne. War is a terrible evil.

Now, this is keeping up the suspense, D.

Hi, Dahmie, nice of you to peep at this. you're at liberty to do so. Thanks for the upvote.

Hi, Purpletears, nice of you to stop by to take a peep on this. Thanks for your upvote and comment.

Hi. Thanks for your upvote and comment. You are at liberty to post it out, what's the point of expressing our thoughts if there's none to read. Thanks, D.

Oh, Rek, you deflated me. I'm glad it came out so strong and deep to touch someone, and I was actually on a hospital bed writing this.Thank you.

Hi, Naik, Thanks for stopping by to reason with me. I was just imagining how many people have left their life in time and cannot be remembered.

The Naija Spirit, Keep up my bros.

Omo eko

Thanks , Dahmie

Hi,Dahmie I love your choice of words, Thank You.

Another one of your beautiful Poem, Naik.

Hi, Naik, I'd wanted to stop, but can't. I just have to say what I feel to say. Thank you for your upvote.

Hi, a songwriter once says we got to ringing and knocking till you do; and I believe you have done it. keep up. Another says don't stop til you get enough. Just keep up, Naik.

Quite a detailed story. You never want to let any moment pass without picking it up. You weaved everything together and still let the story to flow. Nice one from your stable Naik

I love this description. I could almost see the crest of the waves as they grin wolfishly, as if mocking the waters and the people that ride the wave. V. nice piece

Poor Jack, I wonder what has become of his invincibility.

That is quite devastating, I'd say if you ask me. Nice suspense, Joy.