Thank you, I had a different ending in mind, like I said to celestialmind. saying more, but then when I imagined her looking at her husband, I just felt like that was what I would have said! next time :-)

I honestly thought the same thing is going to happen again that night, and that it was a forebode, not just a dream.......I would not have got on that train.

I get the feeling it is hot and humid then..... with things walking in the woods..... ;-)

Mind you, I LOVE, GORILLAS!!!! The other day I was looking at a video where they showed them, lazing in the grass and eating. Their eyes look like there are such emotion in them. I have never seen any other animal with eyes that speak to you like theirs. I started crying even, honest, promise.

Thanks a lot, just don't asked me how she died, I don't have a clue! Hahahaha....

Yes, she was dead all along! I had a totally different ending in mind and then when I imagined her looking at her husband, I just felt like that was what I would have said!

Thank you very much, I appreciate your interest a lot

Surprising ending, not what I expected. Great work.

Thank you very much, I appreciate your comments and input.

Thank you very much, I enjoyed it myself :-)

thank you very much, must admit, i was a bit excited about it myself. :-)

Ahh, halloween, can be anything. Isn't it a time when you are suppose to scare people and tell scary stories? What room number are you in? Meet me in the dining room so we can discuss these dreams you are having! hahahahaha Now is it true? or are you just in a madhouse? I love the gorillas, thanks for spoiling my dream of ever going there!!!!!

What made you think about this? It is so weird, yet so cool....

I love it, love it. I love your kind of writing, it is great! My husband do not think much of me writing. He does not think my stories are good. :-(

Thank you very much, you give me hope that I actually can write :-)

Wow, I really like your work. It is like we are in the same "space - place". Feel like I know you. One question? Do you still have your muse?

I don't know how to say it better than: I understand you........

thanks, and all of you are inspiring me, all over again. xoxoxo

I Like it, so many of us, just want to be the golden crab, and have everything in life. When being happy is sooooo much more important.

Great story, I love the writing style, and I also like writing that way, but I always seem to get negative comments and "that's no how you write a story" from my family and just stopped doing it all together. It is hard when your family are the ones that support you the least and think you wasting your time..... great stuff, i love the story......

Yes, very much so, she is 82 years in October, with another book to be published soon.

thanks, like nupur27 said: "So realistic to feel the protagonist. Well written. " Wow what a compliment!!!!!

Only a pleasure.

would love that!!!! :-)

thank you as well, much appreciated.

Thank you very much, it means a lot to me.

Thank you for your vote. The reason I voted for you is not because you voted for me, but because last week a family member past away. The only thing that was told about him, was where he was born and his life journey. My husband asked me: "What legacy would you leave behind, when you die?" Your story gets me thinking again: what legacy do we leave behind? It makes you think, thanks for that.