Halloween on the Metro!!!

by nupur27
Halloween on A Metro!

Comes the night before halloween, and all the teens from St. Xaviers' College were excited for their 1st halloween in the college campus. They all started planning for the costumes and started their preparations. There were around 200 students going to attend halloween this time. So, they divided work in 4 parts.

Dark black, red blood, ghost white, and deadly blue. They were supposed to plan their costumes according to this code and food was planned as red apples pie, caramel candies, olive rich pizzas, cold drinks and starters and deserts.

The venue was the only thing left to be finalised. And out of no where, a teacher, who never spoke or suggested anything, asked to take up a metro train as their venue. The train was booked from night 11 to morning 5. All students got excited and started planning on halloween. Came the night finally, and as per groups discussed, all were dressed accordingly. Food was in the pantry. Train arrived and all went up their allotted compartments. Rock music started and fun began.

There were white beauties in vampire costumes, tall handsome boys in blood red jackets and there were deadly blue venoms all over with dark black shadows roaming over the train. Had their pies and appetisers. Had their cold drinks and deserts. Had their dances and games.

But one student accidentally went up to the pantry, where he wasn't allowed to step in, saw the professor killing his fellow mates, and mixing blood in apple pie, pouring cold drinks with poisonous vines, and started screaming. The professor couldn't take it anymore, he ran off to his compartment and told to his friends and told them to jump off the train, and save their lives from that monster. As they approached the door of the train, they saw the train flying over the mountains and dark forests. The metro was about 10ft above the ground and there were lightening in the sky, wind was a thunder storm at 100km/hr. All got frightened and lost their senses. The rock music turned into ghosts screaming all around, the monster professor with a knife came towards the kids.


The kids arranged a huge plastic bag and an electric wire, they hit the professor and tied him up in that bag. But poor kids forgot, that he was a ghost and can't be captivated. All screamed hard for help but all efforts were in vain. One by one all the kids were dying.
Then came the turn of winnie, she was all scared as the only one left on the train was her in the middle of her friends' cadavers. She screamed hard and hard.


Yelled for help and suddenly a hand came from the roof of the train to help her. Grabbed her from shoulder and asked her to wake up and stop screaming. Sam, her friend woke her up and told that halloween is the other night, and she should stop having fantasies for her fanatic halloween and sleep and let everyone sleep.

The next day, halloween was there and in the same metro with all around and same food and the professor even. But the difference was, all the reality came opppsite to the dream and all enjoyed the party all night long with ghosts, spirits, vampires and venoms. All in costumes and not in reality.

Happiiiieee halloween!!!

The dream that i have for halloween every night b4 halloween!!!
Though the tradition says, it is scary and ferocious !!
I believe that it is fun and only fun:P
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celestialmind

celestialmind

October 21, 2015 - 06:38 Thank goodness for dreams; at least one wakes up from nightmares! Its interesting to feel like you are narrating the story in person as someone listens.
nupur27

nupur27

October 21, 2015 - 06:41 Thankkooeeuu
rekhanshiraghava

rekhanshiraghava

October 21, 2015 - 07:06 Great writing nupur.... I loved way u narrated it... Remarkable... I was into it....
nupur27

nupur27

October 21, 2015 - 07:07 Thannkkiiee for commenting and upvoting:):):)
sheelsdevi

sheelsdevi

October 21, 2015 - 07:13 Nupur ..my thoughts on your story were kind of lighthearted and whimsical before I knew it was all a dream..After knowing that the ferocity were all but a dream, brought a smile in to my face..well narrated and captivating too
nupur27

nupur27

October 21, 2015 - 07:15 Thannkkiie sheelsdevi..!!! Cant write much of sad and dark things!! So while writing thought it can be a dream and turned the ending!! Thanks for ur comments:):)
Lea Ebio

Lea Ebio

October 21, 2015 - 07:27 a tale of terror with happy ending...thank god for making it all just a dream. I was nearly being carried away into the horrible fantasy world with that train..nice work!
nupur27

nupur27

October 21, 2015 - 07:28 Thankkiiee ejay!!! Jus trying to make the readers happie wd the halloween sweet endings!! Ty fo upvote
Lea Ebio

Lea Ebio

October 21, 2015 - 07:35 nice try nupur! that was a first and you really did give us sweet endings.
nupur27

nupur27

October 21, 2015 - 10:03 Hahahhaa thankkiiee
Joy

Joy

October 21, 2015 - 07:28 Hey nupur. .. nice story....its light hearted as well as scary.... well written
nupur27

nupur27

October 21, 2015 - 07:29 Thankkiee joy for your comment and upvote!!!
Joy

Joy

October 21, 2015 - 07:32 Thanks to you too for the up vote. . :)
nupur27

nupur27

October 21, 2015 - 10:03 Ur welcommme
Ashish14

Ashish14

October 21, 2015 - 07:57 Fabulous :) Keep it up ..!!
nupur27

nupur27

October 21, 2015 - 10:01 Thankkksssiiiree 14 buddy:*
Sharmishtha Shenoy

Sharmishtha Shenoy

October 21, 2015 - 08:39 Good one Nupur - I like your style of writing - seems like you are addressing the audience directly. Excellent work
nupur27

nupur27

October 21, 2015 - 10:02 Thanks a lot sharmishtha for ur comment and upvote:):):)
The Veil of Midnight

The Veil of Midnight

October 21, 2015 - 13:34 Wow.. like the twist!
nupur27

nupur27

October 21, 2015 - 13:45 Ty for the connent nd upvote:):)
Velantra

Velantra

October 21, 2015 - 13:39 I honestly thought the same thing is going to happen again that night, and that it was a forebode, not just a dream.......I would not have got on that train.
nupur27

nupur27

October 21, 2015 - 13:46 Sooo i scared u well enuf!!! Happie dreams velantara!!!
nupur27

nupur27

October 21, 2015 - 13:47 Nd thanks for ur comment and upvote :):)
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

October 22, 2015 - 07:36 Hi Nupur. A very compelling story you've narrated. I felt as though the characters and event was real! Perfect imagery! ;-)
nupur27

nupur27

October 22, 2015 - 11:16 Thannkkiiuuu soo much!!!!! For ur response :):):) Give an upvote if u like it:):):):)))))
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

October 22, 2015 - 13:59 I have! ^_^
nupur27

nupur27

October 22, 2015 - 15:18 Thankkiiee teddy;);)
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

October 22, 2015 - 16:39 Welcome buddy! ;-)
PJNayomi

PJNayomi

October 22, 2015 - 14:45 Wow great!!!!
nupur27

nupur27

October 22, 2015 - 15:18 Thankkss fo upvote and comments
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

October 22, 2015 - 19:59 hahah such a quick, short and warmmm story... loveeddd ittt goood jobbb <3 <3
nupur27

nupur27

October 23, 2015 - 06:59 Tytytytyyyy manahil:):):) long time!!!! And thannkkii fo comments n upvote!!!!
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

October 23, 2015 - 12:02 ur welcome :D yea longggg time :D
nupur27

nupur27

October 23, 2015 - 12:07 Why am I nt seeing ur entry??? Lookin forward for tat!! Don't tell nt participating!!!
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

October 23, 2015 - 12:18 hehe i still havent made up my mind :/ :P
Rach

Rach

October 23, 2015 - 12:50 Mah schoolz name is St. Xaviers !!! Jus hope this never comes to reality!!! Any of this ;)
nupur27

nupur27

October 24, 2015 - 20:04 Ohhh than it's scary!!! Fo u!!
crystal123

crystal123

October 24, 2015 - 18:19 captivating story !!! love it nice ending
nupur27

nupur27

October 24, 2015 - 20:05 Thanks crystal for upvote and coments!!!
Hetz

Hetz

October 24, 2015 - 18:52 Liked the twist and end!!!! Good work!!!
nupur27

nupur27

October 24, 2015 - 20:05 Thanks for encouraging !!!
Jinnu

Jinnu

October 24, 2015 - 19:26 was scared totally!!! Nice work babe!! Krep it up!!
nupur27

nupur27

October 24, 2015 - 20:05 Thannkkiiee jinnu!!!!
Dhwani

Dhwani

October 24, 2015 - 19:33 Loved ittt sweettiie:):):):):):)
nupur27

nupur27

October 24, 2015 - 20:06 Awww thanks lil sis;)
Vishnumayaa

Vishnumayaa

October 25, 2015 - 07:27 AW..so nice .. ALL THE BEST
nupur27

nupur27

October 25, 2015 - 14:04 Thankkiiee thannkkkiiee:):)
Vishnumayaa

Vishnumayaa

October 25, 2015 - 15:12 Welcomeie......
crystal123

crystal123

October 25, 2015 - 14:35 i actually like the idea of flying bus its really nice:)
nupur27

nupur27

October 25, 2015 - 17:02 Thankkiiee for comments and upvote!!! :):)
Zyeke Daniels

Zyeke Daniels

October 25, 2015 - 14:40 Interesting style and nice lighthearted story. Wish you the best for future stories.
nupur27

nupur27

October 25, 2015 - 17:02 Thankiiiuu so much fo ur wishes!!! :):) and comments and upvote:):)
Nidhhzz

Nidhhzz

October 26, 2015 - 04:36 Loved it nupurrddiii :):) worth signing up!!!!
nupur27

nupur27

October 27, 2015 - 04:36 Hehehhee i told u!!
Kukkiiee

Kukkiiee

October 26, 2015 - 07:30 Bivdaiivii te to baaki!! Had to comment in our language u see!!!:):):)
nupur27

nupur27

October 27, 2015 - 04:37 Hahahha so gujju!!!!
Nandu

Nandu

October 26, 2015 - 07:41 Sweet light and scary it was!!!! Loved it mah gal!!!:):)
Mahabali

Mahabali

October 26, 2015 - 07:47 Rockinggggg paaaadddiiiiiiii:):):) Loved it and ur writting since college days u know:)
Yesha

Yesha

October 26, 2015 - 07:58 Scary it was !! All the best!!! I hope wd all of me tat u are thee result:)
Moonland

Moonland

October 26, 2015 - 08:01 Moon is mah destiny!!! This one is urs!!! And i know it!! U ll reach out ur moon;):)
Kotak:)

Kotak:)

October 26, 2015 - 08:05 Kairu kaam ho bhuriii;) Our style u see:):)
Nayan

Nayan

October 26, 2015 - 16:59 Very good;);) Nice efforts
Jasani

Jasani

October 26, 2015 - 17:02 Light and scary it was!!! :):)
Disha Mehta

Disha Mehta

October 26, 2015 - 19:46 Good one Nupur... :) Keep writing this cool stuff...
nupur27

nupur27

October 27, 2015 - 04:38 Thannkkiieee
Henny Shah

Henny Shah

October 26, 2015 - 19:54 Nupur good job done here... you are turning out to be a marvelous writer...
nupur27

nupur27

October 27, 2015 - 04:38 Thankkiieuu soo much!!!:):)
Rushli

Rushli

October 28, 2015 - 10:35 Good work sis!!!.)
pinak

pinak

October 29, 2015 - 19:53 scary though interesting...
Susan Jacob

Susan Jacob

October 29, 2015 - 20:32 Nuuupurrrr,,,,,,,that is wonderful story....just remarkable narration :) Between, I too use to have the same kind of weird dreams.....I could coorelate so easily :D Simply loved it
nupur27

nupur27

October 31, 2015 - 14:20 Thannkkkiiieeeee whispering waters:):):):):):)
Manzee

Manzee

October 30, 2015 - 12:21 Noona!!!! Loved it!!!:):) Great going gal!!!:):):)
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pies11

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