In the start I was confused... And so till the end... But I like the way it is narrated... The plot of the story is nyc

Ooohhhh.... Nightmare.... Good writing... Lil predictable... But still.. Amazing... Liked it...

Wow.... You write so beautifully.... I am just into it.... Loaded with sentiments

Confusing... But I like the plot of the story.... This could be written in a better way... Well... Not scary but a lesson..

Motivating.... Beautiful.... LivedLoved every stanza.... Every word... Every line....

Garden... Title grasping me.... Beautifully penned... Great usage of words... The way it flows... Made me flow into it.... I am in love with this poem...

As I was reading it... U could feel to be part of it... Such an amazing writing... Scary...indeed... Remarkable writing... Super like

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Great writing nupur.... I loved way u narrated it... Remarkable... I was into it....

Thank you nupur....

Memory.... Truly... All I could say is... I loved it... Because I can connect to every word and every line.... Awesome

Well... Scary indeed... I loved the way u presented and narrated it.... Well written...

Oh... I am happy u liked it...

Oh... I am glad... Thanks

Thanks a ton.... I am so glad u liked it...

Oh my my... Heart touching... Way you wrote is just beyond putting it into words.... Great poetry.... Super like...

Quite interesting indeed... Loved it how it opened up slowly... I was into reading... Totally involved.... Awesome writing....

Well thank u so so much... I am so glad u liked it... Thanks a ton

Crazy... Scarry... Story.... But at last awesome ending.... Great writing indeed...

Sure... You can.... Thank u...

I think a little longer one would have made a greater impact on the readers, though the narration is quite good. i like the plot and the way things have been described.

Wow... That's Scarry narration.... I loved it... And it scared me ..... Awesome writing indeed.... Great work

This is NYC...it has a good plot... Fyn writing... And yes... Scary too.... Though... Bit of it was predictable.... Still... I liked it...

Yes... Scary... But sweetened with love and care... Awesome writing... I was lost while reading it... Truly gasping story...

Goosebumps.... Scary... And awesome .... Well the way you narrated tells that how good you are at writing... Superb writing ....

I am so glad u liked it...

Why can't its me for u.... I wish I cud say something like this to someone.... Awesome writing... Super like...