I hate seeing birds in a cage eh; you have captured mine and a caged birds emotion aptly!!! :-))))))))

At first, I was trying to find some clues in the poem to understand what it was about. I thought at first it was about fate(meant to be), then, we are too good to be true(love). The ending was really good!Covered both my guess! :-))))

Hahahahahaha!!Love it!

True, cherishing friends are soooo important!Made me wanna message a few!Good one!

Sorry, just a bit confused, is it about loving a new baby born?or your love life?

Wow!!!!Loved it!...Well-written and perfect ending. You write with such flair and flow!!!

The bell always does spoil the plot!!...Good work!

I really like the thought flow!!!Very impressive!

Thanks a lot lizjay!!!You too, keep writing!

Very different! It kinda feels dark and mysterious, in a good, not a fussy kinda way!

Wow!I like the in-your-face effect about fear!

Losing someone close is hard and painful! Good work capturing the moments!

I like the title@Love comes by hating. I guess when you give it all and you get nothing back, hate is the new found love!Your words have made me think. Keep writing!

You feelings are deep and I really liked the ending from @hope my fear will come to an end again.....Very good ending!!! Though, if I could constructively correct- I think your beginning lines were a bit confusing for me....@Till so many days i just had fear, closer i will come to you i will go far from u dear,......Instead--Many days I had feared, the closer I come to you, the farther you are, A year of moments with you so divine and beautiful by far...so forth!!! Just like your last 4 impacting lines!!!

I believe more than the fear of dying, it's usually the thought of 'how' one will is the cause. Good work!Keep writing!

I am not a cat person, but like them from afar. Their eyes can be scary. especially when their eyes reflects light. Pleasant read.

Be it whichever country, getting a child married is just unacceptable. Heart-breaking!!!

I agree; solace-in yourself-and around is the best feel!!...Like rivers meeting each other to flow together or opposite!Like the emotions captured; I can picture the flow out from you.

Thanks a lot for reading rekhan!!!Glad you liked it!

Love the flow!!!Very well written!Good work!

Facing cancer from both sides of view is hard. I like how you've captured the journey!

Thanks samewriter! You too, stay positive!

Simple and humble. I like @The anonymous tune playing in my hear=Pain or trying to stay sane! Nice

Life can definitely be confusing. Sometimes it isn't just a stage, but a wild circus. Good luck!

True, thoughts can wear us down. I agree @make light the thoughts of our heart..Hard, but possible!

Growing up is indeed fearful eh!!!..I like Peter Pan though! Good luck!

Manahillllllll!!! Thanks!! :-)))) hehehehehe!