The bell always does spoil the plot!!...Good work!
I really like the thought flow!!!Very impressive!
Thanks a lot lizjay!!!You too, keep writing!
Wow!I like the in-your-face effect about fear!
You feelings are deep and I really liked the ending from @hope my fear will come to an end again.....Very good ending!!! Though, if I could constructively correct- I think your beginning lines were a bit confusing for me....@Till so many days i just had fear, closer i will come to you i will go far from u dear,......Instead--Many days I had feared, the closer I come to you, the farther you are, A year of moments with you so divine and beautiful by far...so forth!!! Just like your last 4 impacting lines!!!
Thanks a lot for reading rekhan!!!Glad you liked it!
Thanks samewriter! You too, stay positive!
Manahillllllll!!! Thanks!! :-)))) hehehehehe!
I hate seeing birds in a cage eh; you have captured mine and a caged birds emotion aptly!!! :-))))))))