August 7, 2015
Valued
Valued
by samewriter
Meant to be
Three words that could mean an us
A risk to prove that forever last
Hope to bring some good and satisfy us both.
We are too good to be true
As perfect as it is
As risky as death
Desires to catch the truth.
This is something that I don't want to risk
To gamble with this means an end
May be a regretful regret
Or happiness that would not end.
To you belongs something that I don't want to loss
A thing I want to take a grip
Yours is a friendship I will treasure
Will keep it in the cell of safeness.
Three words that could mean an us
A risk to prove that forever last
Hope to bring some good and satisfy us both.
We are too good to be true
As perfect as it is
As risky as death
Desires to catch the truth.
This is something that I don't want to risk
To gamble with this means an end
May be a regretful regret
Or happiness that would not end.
To you belongs something that I don't want to loss
A thing I want to take a grip
Yours is a friendship I will treasure
Will keep it in the cell of safeness.
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8 COMMENTS
Manahill Naik
August 8, 2015 - 11:35 aww so full of emotions.. impressive =Dsamewriter
August 10, 2015 - 16:08 thanks for the comment :D glad you like it :Drekhanshiraghava
August 10, 2015 - 14:37 Emotions in every word.... every line.... Loved the way you have expressed.... Great poetry.... amazing.....samewriter
August 10, 2015 - 16:09 thanks rekha :D happy that you like my poem :DPriM
August 10, 2015 - 19:38 At first, I was trying to find some clues in the poem to understand what it was about. I thought at first it was about fate(meant to be), then, we are too good to be true(love). The ending was really good!Covered both my guess! :-))))samewriter
August 11, 2015 - 16:35 aight, thanks for reading PriM. yeah, you are right, t'was about both, just that the true love is on their friendship :D
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August 13, 2015 - 17:37 So emotional. Staying friends rather than going to next level is much safer, I can say.samewriter
August 13, 2015 - 20:06 yeah, i can say so as well, i just hope it serves well :D