Hey, The moral is pretty good. :D Just a lil work on your spellings and write your thoughts a bit more clearly :) Give your characters name it brings them to life :D

Haha. Cute.

Haha. Cool. Lol. I agree with too. But ya know. :D

Heh? Haha. Thx. :"D

Hey, Guess i was mixing you with "that one" a lot. Cheers. :D

Okay..I was wrong here then..Maybe next time someone will copy a whole stuff and just make it so all twisted..Guess, plot doesn't matters here.. ...nevermind. :)

God! it is like all the STORIES on the net are unavailable and some ppl can only find Arabic stories to translate and put in some ideas of their own...... Not being rude here but there was this guy here on typotic who wrote the same story as you but ofcourse he placed in someof his own ideas. But hey, the original is still out there and we should respect it so even though I am pretty sure you have read the original one...you should not have just added your own ideas just to make the original look different. :) And btw, that guy's account was removed......

Hey!!!! Thanks a lot for the upvote ;D

Your very welcome, abby :D

Sweet. Nice :D

Nice :D

Hey !!! Thanks for the upvote :) :D

Nice :D

Nice :)

Aww. Nice :)

Uhuh. :D

Very deep and so relatable. Great Job!!! :D

Hey!! Like the idea!! I mean it was so easy easy to remember him through this simple and nicely written poem. Great Job.

Thank you so much for the upvote and the follow. :D

Hey that's sad. Thanks a lot for the follow :D

This is so Sad!! Great Job, though :D

A chwerk!!!! HAahaha. Full of humor and gosh! Really well written. I so want the second part :D Great Job.

Really well written. I like it. :D

Looks interesting. :)

Hazing...That's something new to me. Nicely written. Pretty informative :D

Your very welcome :D

Your very welcome :D Thanks alot for the follow :)