The Stickman and Its awareness that a Boy is drawing him

by neonip
I am an unattractive figure. All I knew, I was born with a few of blurry line with a very broad face. However, my creator which is this humongous creature in the sky with its magic wand seems to pay a lot of attention towards me. I don't quite understand but somehow, my existence brings joy toward my creator. Slowly, my creator gave me something,a smile. It was the first time I felt happy.

My creator seems to stare at something,and fidgeted,and was clearly bored. As I lay myself in the world of nothingness, a sword was created at the right of my hand. I hold the sword firmly for I suspect something might happen, something dangerous but nothing happened. In the most unsuspecting moment, I saw a dream.A beautiful figure emerge from nothingness,as my eyes forget to blink. The moment where I questioned my sanity as if she already bewitched my eyes, the moment I lay my eyes on her. "Princess Ariellia..." I spoke as if I already knew her.

Suddenly, a dark figure accumulate around her, trapping her inside a cage. I see nobody, "Princess!" as I ran unknowingly to his trap. Bam!!! I feel into a deep pitfall. "Hahahahaha.... Alex,Alex. you are a impatient man." A ugly figure with black coat emerge to my range of sight. "I will cage your princess for she is MINE!" said that demon like creature as he continue to laugh again.

"NO! she belongs to no one! Creator, give me strength, give me power". My body feels light and before I knew it, I could fly.Like lightning, I burst out from the pitfall. I grip my sword, preparing my first blow to attack him. The demon like creature had desires, he shows interest in fighting me for he drew out his black sword. Darkness accumulates around him, intimidating his opponent. The demon took the first swing,it was fierce. Like a hurricane he moves, destroying everything he touches, fierce and deadly.

*Clank! Clank! Clank! Clink! Clank!

Blow after blow he struck but I managed to deflect every attack hes given. Although his attack was very strong but it was artless. He only knows how to swing a sword, not wield it. I took my chance when his body was wide open, "Alex piercing heaven attack! Haa!" I pierce my long sword trough his body, a fatal blow. But.... that wasn't the case. What I was fighting were merely an image, a ghost perhaps. For he is silently watching me from a safe distant. I could see him smirking as though he learned something about me. Like lightning I flew towards him but the seconds I arrive, he was already gone. Yet his voice echoes trough my head.

"Its seems you put up a fight, we shall meet again... Hahahaha!!" as his evil laugh echoes trough the entire world. As soon the voice dissapears, I searched the princess.I found her cuff in chains in the cage.With one swing, I destroyed the cage setting her free."You're such a cool hero...." is what I thought she will say but to my surprise, she kept quiet. Only her lovely smile was given to me, which was far better than anything I've ever imagined....

And I look up to the sky, my creator was smiling ear to ear.

end of part 1
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Mahoobee

Mahoobee

May 31, 2015 - 14:07 (★^O^★) very creative. Good job..
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

June 2, 2015 - 12:17 lol i total new concept.. loved it :) make the next one come up soon!! keep up neonip :) :) :)
neonip

neonip

June 2, 2015 - 13:55 yay, thanks manahil and mahoobee =D
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

June 23, 2015 - 13:56 Hey!!!! Thanks a lot for the upvote ;D
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 15, 2015 - 13:46 Thanks a lot for the upvote on sunrise thoughts:3
neonip

neonip

July 15, 2015 - 16:48 You welcome Mahoobee
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 15, 2015 - 21:58 Hehe. :D

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