Thanks manahil :)

Thanks and congrats to you too... :)

Thanks :)

Thank you so much velantra for your lovely comment. ... It means a lot :)

Gross but imaginative. ...

This is gud. ..u have really expressed the mind of a psycho. ... gud job :)

Not scary but fun to read... happy halloween :)

Thanks for ur comment and up vote :)

Hey u can also chk out my story The Halloween Night and give ur feedback :)

Gud one... there should be more to it... hopefully a part 2.. :)

Thanks for ur comment and up vote. .. i guess some ppl just prefer happy endings. ..but it's not possible everytime. ..i am glad u liked it :)

Ur story is gud...It still keeps you excited to know what's gonna happen. .. dont worry u did a gud job :)

Thank you so much manahil. .. ur comment really motivates me to write more and thanks for the up vote too :)

Thank you so much for your lovely comment and the up vote. .. This is my first poem... i usually write short stories... u can chk out my latest story the halloween night and give ur feedback :)

U r welcome :)

Thanks for ur comments and up vote :)

Thanks for ur comments and up vote :)

Thanks for ur comments and up vote :)

Sweet poem dedicated to friends :)

Haha. .. no i'm a woman and my real name is Joyline :)

Good one... i had predicted the end and was right in guessing it...:) but the plot is gud.. A nice read..

Tht was a good read... i was feeling I am reading a romantic novel.... can't wait for the next part...U can also chk out my story The Halloween Night and give ur feedback :)

Wow!!! I really have no words to comment but I can say this much I loved it.... keep writing :)

Thanks for ur comment :)

Superb... scary... unexpected climax..beautifully written. ... very nice :)

U r very gud at writing open ended stories....The plot is gud... but some parts are confusing as in y cudnt Jacob recognize the couple as his parents. ..btw u can also chk out my story The Halloween Night and give ur feedback :)

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment :)