Thanks Velantra, sorry for late reply though.
Thanks David for ur comment and upvote :)
Thank you so much Velantra :)
U have written very beautifully with proverbs by great people. It not only gives the reader the knowledge of t h e subject but also proves you have ample amount of knowledge on the subject u write. I always look forward to ur posts. :)
Women are generally looked upon to protect and take care of her family. But it's very difficult when they themselves fall sick especially when it comes to major illnesses.She is still expected to cook and clean. Unfortunately there are very few men who understand their plight.
Ur story potrays the true difference between men and women. Good job!
May her soul rest in peace.
Velantra, u have beautifully penned the poem. May God give strength to you and your family. Keep staying strong dear.
U r welcome anytime... keep spreading smiles by writing such posts...
Happiness is when I read ur posts... :)... really u r a very versatile writer... keep writing :)
Thanks a lot for ur comments puzzle :)
Looking forward for the next part. .. :)
I enjoyed reading it... looking forward for the next part
Thanks MRR for ur comment and up vote :). .. Btw i'm not a guy :)
Nice sweet little story :)
U r welcome :). . Btw I forgot to ask how's ur daughter? ?
Thanks kaylee mumba :)
Velantra i'm wid u... i didn't get it the first time either.... and m not blonde. .. hehe :P
Thts really creative. ..and u have written it so nicely that I was totally engrossed in it... cud really imagine all the creatures as well. .. gud job...
It's gud but I wish it would have been a little longer...
I was so engrossed reading ur story. ... its sad... but I loved it... sometimes u need pain to realise the good things in life. ..keep writing :)
Ya will try the coming year. ..
Very nice... i loved it... u can also chk out my poem Beauty is not within
I am an indian but am a Catholic so don't know much about bengali culture.
It's nice to read about another culture... nice... :)