can any human actually remain faithfu for very long. we all tend to slip along the way afterwards. we slip cos we sleep. great piece.

good piece

Ok miss, would send you a message

wow, so touching..... and its true.... good one delma

lol.... quite funny

wow, i missed reading and posting on typotic.com

yah Bro, it would really give us easier access ND a more lovely way of sharing our gifts....

I love what I do, and doing what I love to do makes me happy and happy I am. as a comedian & writer, it's all about being happy

wow, getting more thrilling.... next episode please

wow, so inspiring, love your writes arushi.... please continue to serve us more with love dahmie

hum, I love what the poem is all about but d way it went wasn't quite what I would have thought. there are many people who just stop talking to you and when u ask y? "we just stopped talking" hahaha! I want to sing! good bye my lover, good bye my friend

Geez, can't wait for the rest! I can only imagine the knife doing something else than stabbing

alright keep the faith. lol nice write

trust RE, it's going to go a long way..... oh how I wish, I really wish it could be actualized ASAP

we have an unquestionable God and yes its based on real life experience. Have heard of many of its kind

indeed, police officers are superheros just that there seem to be vilians amongst them acting as wolf in sheep's skin. nice one D

LLLL Thanks so much for the encouragement.................................................

Thnks alot Ted

okay, i will reach you, but isn't there another link at which we can use to interract other than gmail, May be Whatsapp?

Hey PT, another lovely poem u gat here, I will send this to my heart rub......

Wow am very glad it did...

Thanks Manik.................................Love encouragement

Comedy exactly. . . . . . . . Just a flash also tho

Brilliance in all your works..... i envy u Naik....

Nice work.....

well i guess u did then.........

Lol, thanks alot K. Although this is still a rough draft, am still thinking of editing it.