wow its nice . as i said you your stories are inspiring. keep writing

i have herd such incidents but the way you have written is wonderful and inspiring . MAY GOD BLESS YOU . keep writing . :0

you really like inspiring otheres THANKS actually you too had inspired me . anyways the story is nice i can,t give any suggestion because you have written based on a real life i can,t properly express it . but its too nice . :0

wow wonderful you are really blessed in writing .

wow a good story love is always there with everyone it do common but the way you wrote it is wonderful pss Mary you are beautiful .. wow

oh thank you ! Blair it is too sweet of you]

i really do wish but i can,t give any porper suggestion because you have truley written a part of a real life and there are such things based on this which we see around us .

oh ! my god its so horrible i still rember that incident . juliet its so heart-touching

is it really true wow ? even i am a indian good to meet you

really i do appreciate it . juliet i really feel good to be your freind you write everything wonderfully

yeah ! its a nice story

nice victor

oh ! romancing story . nice abby

hey ! juliet its wonderful do make the next one lenghtheir

Nice !

too emotional .. its superb

NIce poem . Anticipating one more poem from you .

when will you write part -2 i am waiting . , do it soon please ................

is it really true Abby . good

its good imaginary poem

nice story . you get good ideas .

oh ! you have true freind . Very heart-touching .:)

Nice !

ITS wonderful Juliet . You described a good relationship between a child and a father

:)

your stories are based on real life

IT is truly heart- touching :)