Thanks for the input.

Thankd !

lol. Iq don't sleep well tbh

To be honest I feel peaceful yet confused at the same time, as if there is something I do not know, but I do not seem to mind.

Thank you! I really appreciate it.

I was thinking at first about a parent and a child. As my imagination progressed, the parent became more end more attached to the child, so in the end he killed her. It's hard to let go and this father made sure he had to.

No problem Velantra!

I love it,is Shel Silverstien your dad lol

WTF

Why did it just stop?

Will start on chapter two!

I'm a girl. But glad you asked. I often write in the male perspective, if that helps.

Thanks, I love being weird!

Thanks!

Thank you! Glad it's scary! :)

Really good writing!

Thank you! I got that scary Halloween factor huh? lol

Why did the dad kill Carly? How old was she?

Thanks... Chilling is my forte

Shhhhhhhh..... ;)

Kind of confusing. It could use some explanation and try to use pronouns.

Thanks! I love to write horror!

Thanks Joy!

That's really funny!

Really well written. I loved the plot

I believe that the ending could have used a little more explanation but other than that, amazing

Wow.. like the twist!