Thank you so much kyra

Thanks a ton rekha.. being a keralite I have first hand information about this vampire insects....

That was a bit vague. .but the pain was clear.beautiful .

Thank you estella for your appreciation

Interesting indeed..yes itis the bell that always puts an end to the suspense.. Good one

a good poem that makes you sit and think. if you hate a person and that person is constantly, and that person is succumbing to your hatred, then love is sure to bloom in your heart for that person.

Thanks lizjay.

Death ..such an infinitesimal word..but the impact it has on human being is thunderous..but we all live with that positivity that it will not churn us off stealthily..although it often does often Fear of death, though unnecessary , is a truth . Nice poem .

Thanks friend

It is a poem on the fear of loosing your loved one or being discarded.. More than physical pain it is an emotional one . A nice poem on the cravings of a heart in love.

Thanks a lot ezzah

indeed a strange fear .but come to think of it ,a black cat staring out of the darkness at you when you are all alone in a cul de sac can be frightening. It is the circumstances that make the cat's eye frightening . A unique thought. Nice poem

Dont be sorry friend..your poem is outstanding..well written..if it confused me..well then that is my fault..

Life is a vicious circle..very apt way of putting it .nice way you presentesbit too. But life is vicious or victorious ..it is for each of us to decide ..it can be either ..the choice is ours

Interesting. . though a bit confusing

Thanks a ton my dear friend abbycallan..you boost my ego to sky..

What fine write huntress.you treaded through the delicate subject so well.the feel of the poem is really very profound . Good work .best of luck..

A fear that is unique in its diversity .a story poem .lovely ...you poem speaks volumes.

Very well explained . beautiful poem. Such high voltage fear.nice read

A very sad reminder of the apprehension of a parent who is forever worried about her offspring. You brought that apprehension alive through your soulful writing.. more than fear it sounded to me as anticipation.well done.

Thanks Posh2 for that good wishes and that complimentary comment

What an encouraging comment ,celestialmind.thanks for your comment as well as good wishes

That was indeed one good piece..shadows can play havoc with your senses if you are jittery.in your poem you have played with words so well that the impact of the idea has been captured well.a very interesting rhyming poem.

Such a beautiful poem.. .the sense of being unwanted and lost is the most dreadful fear one can experience in this world ..for a social being like man " destitute" is the nightmarish word.. .wonderfully expressive

Thanks natsume for your wonderful appreciation for my poem

Thanks Vishnumaya...I.visualised that chase and I came out with a poem containing all my fear.

Thank you dear usha