July 27, 2015
July 27, 2015
Her Silent Pain
Her Silent Pain
by samewriter
There she is looking at the ceiling
Doesn't know what will be her ending
Creating a mistake in the beginning
And don't know how to do some smoothening.
She is not really fine
But it seems so early to fight
And it wouldn't make any sense
For she is losing her part.
How come everybody knows when she doesn't know
She got no reason to bring on her pride
For she is not sure
If what she is doing is right.
She is uncertain
Should she frown or
Should she fake smile
To hide her silent pain inside.
Doesn't know what will be her ending
Creating a mistake in the beginning
And don't know how to do some smoothening.
She is not really fine
But it seems so early to fight
And it wouldn't make any sense
For she is losing her part.
How come everybody knows when she doesn't know
She got no reason to bring on her pride
For she is not sure
If what she is doing is right.
She is uncertain
Should she frown or
Should she fake smile
To hide her silent pain inside.
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16 COMMENTS
jack
July 27, 2015 - 22:33 So deep darling. Seems to come from somewhere only you knows where.samewriter
July 28, 2015 - 11:23 haha, i'd be willing to take you to that place :)jack
July 28, 2015 - 14:53 So kind of you. I'd love that.nupur27
July 28, 2015 - 05:17 Her silent but loud pain!!
July 28, 2015 - 11:19 comment has been removedsamewriter
July 28, 2015 - 11:22 aye, maybe someone should be ready for some deafening silence. p.s. i do love oxymoron :Dnupur27
July 28, 2015 - 14:49 Loved the poem!!!!!!samewriter
July 28, 2015 - 16:55 aye, thanks my math profnupur27
July 28, 2015 - 17:44 Math prof hahhaa :PMahoobee
July 28, 2015 - 08:48 She is screaming in pain, silently. Gah!! I love it. :Dsamewriter
July 28, 2015 - 11:17 yeah, oxymoron. thanks for the lovely comment :Dsamewriter
July 28, 2015 - 11:24 so glad you like it :*Mahoobee
July 28, 2015 - 11:32 Your very welcome :DManahill Naik
July 28, 2015 - 13:06 so sad.. :(samewriter
July 28, 2015 - 16:54 yeah, i wish she'll be fine :Dsheelsdevi
August 8, 2015 - 17:01 That was a bit vague. .but the pain was clear.beautiful .samewriter
August 10, 2015 - 16:11 thanks for reading sheela, for the comment as well :D