Reminds me a bit of Sharukh Khan's poem going viral at the moment. Very well written

Poignant!

Nice!

Very well written. Write something less heartbreaking next time!

Nice one!

Imaginative - I liked it. :-)

What is fine fescues?

Amardeep - would you like to review a book I have written? it is called Vikram Rana Investigates and it is available in Amzon Hope you will read.

I could visualise it just like a movie - beautifully written

Good one

Hmm sinister!

What happens next?

Sad song

Thank you !

Well written I could imagine the scene playing out so well

Beautiful expressions

Honestly portrayed. Nice!

Beautifully written

Stay happy always!

Very insightful - and very well written. I wish there was a share option. Beautiful!

Yes - being alive and healthy is a daily blessing that most people do not seem to appreciate.

Very well expressed

Is it the end? It could continue some more - so that we get to know the stalker and why he/she is helping Asbeth.

Nice suspenseful beginning. Luckily the second part has also been published. So I will start on that immediately! :-) Hi Velantra How are you? Lovely writing Love , Sharmishtha

Thanks Velantra Absolutely awesome work the way you combined all our work into something so beautiful. And belated Happy New Year. Sorry have been really busy Will get back as soon as possible! Lots of hugs Sharmishtha

No. Have been a bit busy lately what is the title?

Happy birthday Velantra, this community loves you and I certainly do! Have a great day and may all your dreams come true!