To tell you the truth, this poem is written from real experience, it's so hard out there...

Lol yeah

U deserve it dear....

When I was reading this poem, I felt like it was talking about me...great piece of work I like it

What a wow poem...it's good that you're telling a story through poetry I like that... thumbs up

So touching and deep...well structured and written...keep it up..

Lol you have such a great way of writing.... I know you don't find your fear funny but to me it is...good piece of work keep it up...

Mmmhh.....what a nice poem....good luck

Lol this was supposed to be my draft and now it's out. Anyway my poem for the competition is out called " the reason why I fear men" read it and tell me what you think....

lol

Ok

lol cool stuff but I don't understand it

Wow I wish I could write so well like you....gud story I like

Such a good light story .keep it up I like it

Good story,I also love me time.

nice poem, I like it.

well written.. ^^

Well, thanks I'll try.

A very good story indeed. Sometimes I also face the very same challenge. Keep it up..good luck.