Maybe you should edit this story...and try untick? does it work?

aww...how could you decide that future can't offer you something better? ;) Let go of the past...Don't be afraid...It will be great! Well written!

Lol...thank you... <3

hahahaha! well...i missed you guys!! so much of catching up to do!

Yes!! It is really a silent killer...you can never know who is fighting depression at times!

Very Very GOOOD AND well written..Nicely done...

ah...the struggle will definitely lead to victory. only for those who believe and work at it! Well written.. somehow I feel inspired!

Co-related events...Can't escape the choices we make in life! Good work though.. You do know the competition is based on a picture though nah?

That escalated quickly! haha...the society is never satisfied! haha...nicely done

Emotional...Your intro line is so catchy. “With each click of your fingers on my letters, you rouse my silence and give our words a voice.” Nice.. A father is an unsung...Just because he is not good at expressing his emotion, doesn't mean he does not have any! Love it <3 <3

A great message indeed. Life is short, but the journey is long. Never take pleasure by jeopardizing the future! Bravo..

Mind-blown! Nothing good can come out of a war! =( A tragedy which is depicted beautifully! <3

It takes a big leap to get the truth out. As you said...people love to be ignorant. I hope things change for the better in the future! Loved it =)

You’re always clumsy. You’re stubborn as shit. You’re bossy. Fussy as hell. Impulsive as whatever. Patronizing. Quarrelsome. Arrogant. Gullible. Overemotional. Possessive. Sometimes aloof. Dogmatic. Blunt. Unfathomable. Frugal. Careless. Have we met?? It is like my mum nagging me! hahaha... Interestingly written... Good luck!

Woow! A very drastic measure! End his life??Tragic...Loved the quote and the ending! =)

I agree with manahil & abby...You have a very adorable writing style! I hope grandpa's articles will be published someday.... ;)

I could imagine a grandpa with white hair enjoying his tea and crunched over the typewriter..allowing the story to flow out of him..Nicely done! I noticed the very short story competition was not on top of ur post...Did you check the small box at the bottom?? Good Luck!

Sad endings make me sad... =( loved the way u took the story.. :)

Happens to me too! Unfortunately, here we can't get cash back...We have to exchange and buy something else... nicely done...btw.. "The teller had a bandage on her uncle" Do u mean ankle? great piece though! <3 <3

A touching story line! The sacrifices parents do for their kids.. =( Did you go through the rules n guidelines for the competition? you have to write based on the picture...You can check it out by clicking on the "Very short story competition starts in..." at the top

I presume, you are a photographer? All the details! Can't deny it, technology has improved so fast in a short time! But did u notice the rules of the competition? you have to write based on the picture...You can check it out by clicking on the "Very short story competition starts in..." at the top

hahahaha...yes! mutton biryani!! Craving for yummy food! been busy with work...I thought i had only 18 minutes to submit one! Time to grab a popcorn and have a feast for my mind! reading mode on!

Aww...that is so sad! Well...as they say, always be yourself when u are starting a relationship. But I think it is not the poet's fault!

hahaha...this is good! the guy is a genius!

omg...hahahaha....that would have been the most awkward questions ever! I would have just got down the bus and walked 3kms...hahaha

yes! so awkward but felt loved too! I love kids..so it was not too bad...i just let him play with the phone...thank god he didn't go through my photo gallery... *wink wink* hahaha...

His dad was sitting at the back...haha..he just ignored the dad when he called him...I didn't mind actually...coz i love kids!! <3