'I tried everything.. My face is getting worse..'
Giselle had to walk to school because of her scooter is broken. Everybody looked at her with disgust. Short dark hair, wears glasses, freckles all over her face, thick messy eyebrows, huge lips and thin body. no curves.
Giselle sits alone on recess as usual. In front of her is Ruby. Whom is famous of her beauty. all of the boys sits around her. When Ruby noticed her, she smiled, "can you please not sit in front of me, Giselle? you'll make my lunch spoiled"
Giselle felt a thunder struck her heart. She gets up and run away crying.
"Ruby! That was so rude of you!!" A student scold her.
"pfft who cares,better off shes gone anyways"
Giselle ran really far away until she stumbled into a garden. A wide open beautiful garden. Not as beautiful as her face(sorry i'm just kidding)
'I didn't remember there was a garden near this school..'
She took a stroll into the garden and meet a gorgeous lady wearing a black dress and an apron a with a garden hat on. She is beautiful like an orchid. But Giselle's face is better like the underground dirt(okay now i'm just being mean.I apologize)
The lady noticed her crying face."Oh my..how ugly.." she said.
"I know! You don't have to tell me that!!" Giselle shouted.
"oh well you don't have to shout young lady. Surely a face like you needs some help. What is your wish?"
"My wish? um..curved body, shaped eyebrows, clean face, pointed nose, small lips.."
"that is all? well then,your wish is granted. Drink this for only one drop on your tongue and it'll last a month every each drops" She hands a small bottle to Giselle.
"what? you were serious? i thought.."
"silence! now go home and wear it on, it'll work. bubyeee~! hohoho.."
(After that day)
Giselle steps out of the shower getting ready for school. already sprayed a drop into her mouth. She then slipped and fall in front of her mirror. She was thrilled of her face had truly changed beautifully.(this time i'm serious. it did changed)
Had to walk to school because of her scooter. But this time it all different, all the students thought she was a new girl in school. When she arrives to her class, the other students comes towards her because to them, shes sitting on the ugly girl's desk. "Pardon me, are you new? you're actually sitting on the goblin's- I mean,on Giselle's desk" The guy said. Giselle look at them. "But this IS my desk." The crowd then went loud it pulled Ruby's attention.
Ruby could not believe who is she looking at. "You are that ugly bitch?! what did you do to yourself? If you are already hideous, then stay hideous!" Her classmates were shock of what she have said. "So what, if I am pretty of not? It's my life,my decisions. And I think, it's your heart is hideous!" Giselle fought back and walk away. Ruby froze.
A few weeks have traveled and Giselle didn't change one bit. But one they, Ruby wanted to talk to her somewhere private.
"I'm very sorry of what I have said to you all these years Giselle.. It's just that,..to be honest,I was ugly too before.
Giselle's eyes widen.
"But then, for beauty, I would do anything. I go to spas, exercise,makeup, and everything! so every time I see you, you reminded me of myself in the past.. But now.. will you forgive me?" she holds both of giselle's hands. She nods.
"yeay! thank you.. and I'm actually really happy that you're very pretty now" Giselle says nothing and pulled her hands from her and run away.
Ruby didn't chase along but stood there with curiosity 'I knew it..There is something else'
Giselle ran back to the garden and hands back the bottle to the lady. she told she couldn't accept it anymore. "Whats the point if you don't use your own effort to earn something? forgive me Ms.. take this back please." The lady take it back and Giselle walks out of the garden.
What Giselle didn't know was, Ruby had followed her around. Desperately wanting to know her secret of her beauty. She meets the lady in the garden asked for the potion. "Why do you want it? You are already pretty" The lady asked Ruby.
"I want to be more than beautiful." The lady stared at her for a whole minute.
"Well then, here you go, drink as much as you want"
At home, Ruby drank the whole bottle empty.
when she goes to school she was shiningly beautiful! so shinning that no one could see her face because it's too bright!
"We can't see your face! theres too much light!"
Ruby then suddenly felt she is physically getting weak and died.
Manahill NaikJuly 13, 2015 - 11:27 ahahah what a cute abrupt end.. Feels soooooooo goooooooooooood to see ur story after suchhhhhhhhh a long time XD omg cant stop laughing at your comments in the brackets lol seriously :P :P
M smilesJuly 14, 2015 - 08:41 hahahah awhh thanks girlfriendd~ i missed you guys really to be honest T_T
Manahill NaikJuly 14, 2015 - 09:56 same here,,, me n abby talked about u often xD
abbywookieJuly 13, 2015 - 14:04 hahhaha :D this is fascinating lol :) and your comments in the brackets, double lol :D all the best, Mary, and AFTER ALL THIS TIME YOU FINALLY DECIDED TO SHOW UP
M smilesJuly 14, 2015 - 08:43 ABBYYYY i love you hahah xD thanks~ I'll try my best to present more okay. ugh..exams. peace!
abbywookieJuly 15, 2015 - 11:30 hahahaha alright, peace. stupid PT3 rite. I get it. =D
nupur27July 13, 2015 - 15:15 hahahaa!!! Such an end it was! Great one must say!!
M smilesJuly 14, 2015 - 08:44 thanks nupur! :DD
MahoobeeJuly 14, 2015 - 12:44 Woah!! Didn't expect that. Woosh!! Nicely written and really like it. Great job. Good luck :D
M smilesJuly 15, 2015 - 13:22 Yo~ gracias mahoobee :D hehe
MahoobeeJuly 15, 2015 - 13:39 Hehe. Your very welcome. The cover image is so cute. :D
PenFairyJuly 16, 2015 - 05:42 That escalated quickly! haha...the society is never satisfied! haha...nicely done
M smilesJuly 16, 2015 - 18:51 thanks penFairy! :D true of what you said. but some people are grateful too :)
MahoobeeJuly 16, 2015 - 10:48 Thanks a lot for the upvote :D
M smilesJuly 16, 2015 - 18:53 awwh..its a pleasure mahoobee^_^
MahoobeeJuly 16, 2015 - 19:14 Hehe. Thanks :D N congrats for coming in top ten :)
M smilesJuly 17, 2015 - 04:32 welcome :) huh? top ten for what? :0
MahoobeeJuly 17, 2015 - 12:16 The short story challenge :) the results are on the irst page :)
Manahill NaikAugust 8, 2015 - 13:15 heyyy lovely profile piccc <3 <3
M smilesAugust 8, 2015 - 13:28 hahah i actually hesitated lol
Manahill NaikAugust 8, 2015 - 13:29 bhuff please *rolleyes*