wow this is so freaking sentimental!!! loved it!

u r most welcomee !! ^-^

buhahhaha xD

ah you took me on a beautifullll journey! nyc poem <3

Whoa truly beautiful <3 i agree with the philosophy thingy! makes good sense alright :P <3

Whoa really nice.. A beautiful lesson! I dint know malaika naveed had this in her lol u r all cheeky and silly in school xD but ur story's really thoughtful!!

LOL :P XD

yeaa work on ur grammar kiddo xD

LOL malaika srsly???? hahahah u need some inspiration xD by the way,, u dint tell me u were bout to join typotic o.O unexpected :P

a pure boost up :) very nice.. <3

sooooo uniquuueeeee <33333

so short but literally broke my heart <3 #FAVE

A wonderful story indeed.. well deserving position.. keep upp <3 congrats!

joyyyy it was my fave <3 congratssss.. well deserved :-)

Congratsss sheelsdei!! a wonderful piece :)

ooohh exciting donut!! :D good work keep up!

aww nice <3

well written.. well expressed good job and keep up as always :)

whoaaa beauty in your words joy?? i remember my frst attempt was rather silly. ur damn good and i can sense tht u can write poems too :P keep up amd want mo :P

weirddd writing!! likes it :)

hey by the way, tag ur story for the halloween competition otherwise it wont be considered as a part of the halloween entries !!

LOL thats all folks!! :D haha veryyyy thrilling.. loved ittt keep up :D :P

me toooooo!! i predicted the end lol :D such an exciting storyyyy :P too typical yet halloweenyyy.. happy halloween welll done :D <3

whoaaa such a nice piece.. mine feels so bogus lol :D soooo sweet and kinda scary :D keeep uppp cant believe how much u improved in these days :D p.s: show up more often puh leasseee we miss a girly :p

haha thenks ;)

oooh exciting.. well done.. superb narration and the ending <3 #allperfect :)

whoaaa superb.. superb superb writing.. i love it when a story leaves me pondering irritatingly in the end.. its just so fun lol.. :P keep the good work up