November 14, 2015
November 14, 2015
ROALD DHAL BY, MALAIKA NAVEED
This poem is about a very famous story writter
ROALD DHAL BY, MALAIKA NAVEED
by hanachan
ROALD DHAL,ROALD DHAL,ROALD DHAL
The great writter shall
The children's best storywritter
He even was a fighter
He never looked down
And he never gave a frown
He didn't lived that long
But he lived by a lovely song
He never was a zero
That's why he is still my hero!
The great writter shall
The children's best storywritter
He even was a fighter
He never looked down
And he never gave a frown
He didn't lived that long
But he lived by a lovely song
He never was a zero
That's why he is still my hero!
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by hanachan
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- Nov, 16 2015
8 COMMENTS
FieNd
November 14, 2015 - 17:29 Its Roald Dahl, not Dhal! Check your grammar, a lot of mistakes there!hanachan
November 18, 2015 - 14:04 ummm sorry but i wrote that when i was 6FieNd
November 18, 2015 - 17:17 No problem, never too late to correct it though!Manahill Naik
November 15, 2015 - 11:52 yeaa work on ur grammar kiddo xDhanachan
November 18, 2015 - 14:06 aa i know u r philosopher of english sis xDManahill Naik
November 18, 2015 - 14:16 buhahhaha xD
November 17, 2015 - 06:55 comment has been removedKayleeMumba
November 17, 2015 - 06:58 your poem has a great theme...just correct the grammar eeyy....don't be discouraged just continue to write..yu will be wonderfulhanachan
June 10, 2016 - 06:16 thnx kaylee kaylee please friend me on wardashahzaib6@gmail.com