haha.. lol its still as good then :P

Younger! lol and funnier :P :P :P and yeah congrats for improving *winks.. keep on doin better :D :D

wow.. this was simply beautiful and extremely creative.. keep up :) :) :)

hhahaha.. the way u write steven makes me smile lol :P goodbye typotic?? lol are u kidding me thats funny.. u still gotta work on grammar but other than that the theme and the over all story is AWESOME!! loved it :P keep up and keep on doin better.. P:S u dont sound like 18 when u write.. (if u r 18 :P).. and mind!! thats a compliment =)

lol cooolllll :P :P

lol safe hahahah.. :D :D :D

lol.. my pleasure :P

Lmfao hahaha.. ure comment made me laugh lol :D :D :D

Im like 0.0 wow this was just wonderful.. made me teary eyed :,( lol

haha u r most welcome.. this actually made me laugh love your works ure really talented :) :)

hmm i think its quite inspiring.. dont worry :P its the best :D :D keep up and be confident lol..

nice one ;D

beautiful n deep :) :) tho id like it better if youd write it in a proper format, adding the commas stead of the full stops and line breaks too.. just a tip lol anyway keep up the superb work :P

ohh i see... nicely done.. ill look forward to more n study hard lol :P

this is truly amazing.. btw where r u from? :)

wow this is so interesting.. lol hope im not too young for this one fairy ;)

lol iuno bout that ;P btw good thing u added the cover photos :D

ohhh i see :)

is it goin to be continued??

wow..u said its a true story.. can i know who it was actually ?? :) beautiful.. keep up

three words.. i love this :P :P keep up.. nice start very very creative :)

aww sweet... just like you.. keep on writing and improving.. give out ur best... thumbs up strawberry :) :)

lol hope it would do u some good... ohkay i release all the doubt then :D

i'm like 0.0 wow awesome and sadistic at the same time.. uhmm frankly speakin,, uhh ur stories are mostly bout heartbreaks.. whats going on fairy?? ;P

oh you'll have that coming as long as im here!! :P

youre most welcome bee.. best ov luck :)

ahh CC!! uve done it again.. won my heart.. the whole i swear :D :D