Return to God, don't think you are dirty for Him to accept you. The sick needs the doctor.

Keep on writing dear very impressive..

this poem has it all dear,so emotional and touching but the most important thing is how you expressed it, well written.I like the last rhyming part soo gudoo!

Fear of death, but the funny thing is that you can't see it when it's coming, and when it comes you can't run away.nice one

This is really fear, the way it has been expressed and the vocabulary is so great.Where did you learn it? nice piece dear.

Good work...keep it up.

for me its so scary, this creature really knows how to do eye contact, it can make you shy and at the same time afraid...shoh!

I like the description: every beginning has an end but memories has no end.That's true.

This is really what happens during the war, and as i was reading this piece I could figure out how bad it is.I like the description, nicely written.

nice story, it reminds me of those days in primary school when we were asked to tell stories.I like this one so much and its well written

@celestialmind- Thank you will definitely improve on that.

That's an interesting story, well written and logic.I was just flowing as i was reading it.keep it up

very nice, its interesting.As I was reading it i was imagining Fuji.

Your writing is amazing dear, even though i got lost here and there the story is the best.

@neonip- no her grandfather is not the ghost but he knew something behind the mystery of that house.So it was just a plan to sacrifice his niece for power, you know.

This is very great indeed, i like your writing and a novel can come out of it.

very nice..

@mahoobee- this is not an Arabic story and I have never read one..if it happens that its similar to the one you know am sorry to tell you that its a coincidence.I cannot write and post something that I know its somebody's original.

This is very serious, the love of money is the root of all evil, and greedy itself is a disease of the soul.Poor guys!

There is the spiritual world, and many people are suffering because they only fight physically while the battle is spiritual.They don't know that there is a way out, and God is the answer.

Here in Africa is very common.Sometimes parents give away their daughter looking at how rich the man is.They are too much into material things.

well written and heart breaking.I usually see in the news how other people are suffering because of this weather phenomenon.

You can write dear, I am learning from you as well. It's great how did you come up with it?

Think it's nice though i got confused along the way, but its well written anyway.Keep it up

very nice..its like I was watching a horror movie as I was reading it.

Shems! this is really heartbreaking,and it is not godlly at all.How can someone go through pain for nine months and give away her baby just because she is a girl.Don't they know the power of a woman?

Very good story indeed,organized and well written.Keep writing and explore your talent