yes, they should better beware! love this poem

you are right on that box Velantra...

well, we could be...and we're already friends here in typotic.hehe

of course, I knoe you're trying to portray their intense emotions though...but I still can grasp the essense of the story despite the swearings

thanks for the upvote too and for liking my posts

um...honestly speaking..yes...way too many swearing my friend....it kinds of hurt the eyes or ear if it is actually said...but the plot is getting exciting...but I think u should reduce the swearing

thanks for reading and commenting Velantra! and for the upvotes too...I'm glad that you enjoyed it to the end.

thanks for reading David.

thanks David! and thanks for the upvote too!

i love this..and I really hope I had someone like this..

I sincerely hope everyone will overcome the dark sky in them..including me...

ur welcome my friend

that was a very nice inspiring poem, so full of love!

wow! what an exquisite poem from an exquisite author"

poor hedgehog...the human must have treated him badly

yeah...you've got an exciting characters and I somehow can relate to the plot..but not the characters..hehe

i really like this story and will want to know what's going to hPpen next

this is getting more interesting friend...lol

that's the spirit my friend!

i speak for the general..those who were insulted and discouraged in any way..I myself experienced those, although n a lighter way. But some friends brought my hopes up..thanks for them... You know, there are people who will want to hurt us or will mKe us feel bad..it's just so irritating sometimes..I know someone who always makes me feel bad..who alwYs try to make me feel lesser...and trust me my friend..it makes me feel uncomfortable..may god guide her soul

yeah...sadly, most of it were true for some...life seems easy when still a child, so innocent..they never know that life was difficult until they grow up..thanks for reading Velantra and for the upvotes too and for favoring my post

i hope you're coping..just pray to God always..have strength

right sharm! thanks for the upvote too!

my condolence for your sister Velantra. I hope you're ok...that's a most touching poem..

right Sharm...she paid her life for her victory and justice too..thanks for reading Sharm and ur upvote too!

i feel inspired with your poem and strenghtens me..thanks for sharing this beautiful poem

yeah...everything got its price..thanks Velantra for appreciating