Hi sharm...miss you guys...thanks for that big compliment...

Sad but lovely..and remarkably written...

That was sad and horrible to happen to someone who only found a new hope...

Thanks Dahmie

Thanks

Thanks sharm..been offline for a while

Thanks rekhan..good to hear from you? How r u doin my friend?

so very true! what a very nice piece

thanks friend..you're so great

what the heck...i don't get it why does her grandmother had to kill her too...anyways...it'sca great story and really scary and mysterious...

what's bothering you my friend?

good old wise words of wisdom...i can relate to every line coz every line is the reality..love this one

sad but true...we need someone to care for us yet almost everyone's mind is preoccupied with their own business

thanks for appreciatong rekhan

oh...what a family they had!...more!

yeah...it's so sad when you think of it...the innocent lives that never knew real violence were the victims of cruel act..

lol...i may consider it though.. hmmm...that's a good idea friend

oh my god! i'm so much consumed with suspense! so many secrets that revealed to another revelations..can't wait for the next chapters..

be grateful it's not the mind that's overfatigued my friend...lol...do take a rest though

more! I want to read more!

then let's jump! lol...why though?something's wrong n ur house friend?

thanks Faisan! I'm happy you appreciate it

and I'm so close to being cathartic (i check the wiki for that term ...lol...it's kinda deep and rare term)...thanks for reading and upvoting Lorenzo ...writing and posting becomes my self-expression now...lol

that's just so sad...may God blessed those innocent lives...and may justice prevail for those innocent victims..such cruelty!

I hope things will get better in your nation...keep the faith and keep fighting your country my friend..and may God help you make it a better place..I know someday He will give your country His blessings...don't lose hope

suspense! you keep me hanging by the cliff my friend...and you seem to know how to stop at suspenseful cliffhanger I couldn't wait to read the next chapter...my curiousity grows stronger my friend for what will happen in the end...I can't wait to read the next chapter...

woah...i think i could understand what you're implying at that house...the house of caviat?hehr