Thanks sharmishtha for the comment nd up vote. glad you liked it....

I agree with you! I guess he never gave it a second thought but if he had divorced her how would he cope living with a junior brother who was a catalyst to his broken home. thanks for the upvote nd the comment

great story. one funny thing about this story is that it contains 2016 words...... you are actually in the present. lol

thanks for the comment sir. glad you liked it....

awww.... what a story what a writer

this the end????

u wlcm

Oh my Nigeria, rise and become great as I was told u were..... good one sir

nice

Wow..... gotmore tensed.... hope he won't something more horrific next time

You do know you HV the power to make it "be" and not "might be". I will b expecting the next

You do know you HV the power to make it "be" and not "might be". I will b expecting

And do you plan to continue after this epi? I can the beginning of a great book by M.D KHAMIL :-)

What's the assurance that they would appreciate, people over here are more concerned about making money than having friends. and very good in gossiping. from experience; they won't gossip about your good deeds but your faults, mistakes and wrongs. its life

hmmmm, u never listen, do u? now see what you HV caused..... pffff..... m enjoying it

OK, thanks for the comment but Don't you think I should feel guilty for consuming their market without paying? how would I face them anytime I meet them somewhere else???

OK, lol..... thanks for the comment.

U wlcm

Yeah, but we have also have different brands here in Nigeria. . .

Hi. thanks for the approval you gave me, I have published 'ABDUCTED' on dahmie's blog. . . . here ----> https://dahmie.wordpress.com/2016/09/30/abducted/

am sure you would be thrilled at what happened next, check it in the second part....

Chei! This sent shivers down my spine ... in my country here, network companies are fond of calling your number with strange numbers, hope it won't turn out to b the demon one day.... kiki

lol, glad you liked it. . . .thanks 4 checking it out

Yes, I understand that feeling . . but you've got to push in and find it, its in you, then bring it out... ... ....

Thanks alot

Awwww.... come on, you ve got to finish this piece ...

Pls, permit me to publish this story on my blog. www.dahmie.wordpress.com