Nice story is this the end cause you made it look like there is more to come, update pls

Wow, i love this poem, This i great work R. keep it up....

hmmmm. I smell action and blood already, am following, keep it up

Thanks bross, glad you feeling it. Anticipate more, i have learned and am still learning....

i like the fact that it has meaning and its well composed, nice poem

hehehe, yeah thanks for reading

Yeah, thanks boss

Nice one I already started filling my blank pages on a celebratory note. you need to hear my testimonies.

I could feel the intense in the story, it is a nice write up. keep the flag flying

Thanks S. Your comments and upvotes keep me going

This really a nice piece, simple and easy to relate with. shout out to everyone loving someone but ain't being loved back....

Wow, nice work here.... you spot on

Very nice poem, love the rhythmic use of words..... thumbs up

same to you, thanks for reading

You are very much welcomed.

nice one sir, I can relate

thanks rekha, Am glad you can relate well with it, merry Christmas

what a year it had being indeed...

GBAM!!!! I HV fallen in love again with your brilliantly composed poems

Yes it is, the small but mighty state. Every citizen of Lagos has his own story to tell about it. thanks for the comment nd upvote sire.

Thanks for the comment n upvote. next coming up shortly

Thanks, am glad you love.

Yes, it still baffles me how some people find pleasure in young underaged females when there are older ones who have all the attractive features. I call them cowards

Yes it does hurt, but we should learn from those who we have through it before and kip swinging.

Ow nice, congratulations to your super-family.......

nice one

this got me, it really did