I will give it a try !!!!Thanks :)

thanks for tell :) rekhanshiraghava i will updated it as soon as i get some time : sharmishtha

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Nice !!!! At first I got scared by the pumpkin heads but it was a nice twist :)

I have corrected it read it and tell me

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i actually like the idea of flying bus its really nice:)

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captivating story !!! love it nice ending

THANKS!!!

nice !!!! love the plot thank God it was a nightmare only

Thanks

Nice horror plot, but you did a mistake in this line"he small child comes in David hpuse " hpuse is suppose mean house right :)

you are welcome

well its my first try , basically in this poem a guy is talking about the beauty of his lover.

thanks :)

ok ! willl thanks. as soon as i get time .

love it nice:D

hey ! its written in a very good way .:) love it!! can you also check mine out .

hi FieNd nicely written !!! love it :)<3,<3