Be Careful In Dreaming, You Might Be Like Her!

by puzzle
In a small town surrounded by a beautiful garden, there lives a girl who grew up believing in fairy tales. Her father was her King, while her mother was the queen. Their simple house that was made of stone became the castle of her own. And along with her make believe fairy tales, she knows that one day there would come a strong prince to conquer her castle's walls and win her love.

She lived her life wishing for the right Prince to come along. With that said, she knows that in order for her to be deserving of what she was wishing for, she worked hard to be the ideal girl. She studied hard, acted like a lady, discovered her hidden talents and became appealing to everyone's eyes. She never fail to her goals. She became the woman that every man can look up to. A pretty face with a brain and possesses different admiring talents. She is now the girl that every man would wish for, as what they told her.

Years and years gone by and she is still wishing and waiting. She is not realizing that she is already becoming far from the ideal girl that she thought she was portraying. Her appearance, her power and her being prideful started to eat her up. She started to reject every simple man that tries to win her heart. She talks harsh to them, belittle them and denied even the friendship they are offering her.

Her expectations gets too high without her noticing that makes her the undesirable one. She thought she was saving her self for the one that would deserves her the most and that she also deserves the most to have. But time have been so playful to her and she became that someone whom no one wants to be with anymore. No one wants to pay attention to her again. Her outside beauty became unnoticed. People only see the attitude she showed them.

The time became more cruel to her when it took the only people that cares for her despite of everything. When her King and Queen died, she was left to her castle alone and starting counting her every teardrops fall. The house where she grew up that was once her castle became a house made of stone. And now there is nothing even a door.

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February 3, 2015 - 06:27 Nice story.Keep on writing. You can also read my story named" HAIRS CUTTING'' :-)
puzzle

puzzle

February 3, 2015 - 08:53 Thank you Ramisa! I'll check that out! :)
mischievousPrincess

mischievousPrincess

February 3, 2015 - 06:52 :) a story with a valuable lesson :)
puzzle

puzzle

February 3, 2015 - 08:53 Thank you! Indeed it has its meaning :)
Joy

Joy

February 3, 2015 - 14:58 Sad but good. Hey you can chk out my story God's gift of love .
puzzle

puzzle

February 3, 2015 - 16:17 I would love to! Checking it now :) @Joy
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

April 22, 2015 - 22:00 true :)
crystal123

crystal123

August 14, 2015 - 10:35 hey ! its written in a very good way .:) love it!! can you also check mine out .

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