So heart-breaking :( Except for some grammar issues, I think you're story is good!

haha...i love the BIG LOL thing :D and you're even more adorable manahil!

Huntress is dianne your real name? :p yeah, this one is really good...keep up the writings!

Yes, and in many other countries too lizjay. I have read a lot about them and it's just so infuriating. I hope we could do something about it. But with this writings and movements from people who truly care, I know we will be able to stop them in the future. Thanks for writing this one!

I just hate John for coming up into conclusions without any explanation...tsk2.. This is really good, just needed more details on the climax I guess, but otherwise it's good!

haha...thank you then :D for all the encouragements to finish this story!

yeah, think so too abby :D I love the story, although I would like to ask if you can please put the letters at the beginning of each sentence on caps? :p I hope it will help... @Mary: Can I call you Mary too? :)) I'm one friend of abby, manahil, and mahoobee :D

I just love this story :)) so beautiful!

I was almost certain it was just a dream, but I thought it was Andrew who would catch her, I would love it if it was him.. :p

thank you katherine :) I appreciate it...

Oh! looking forward to what's happening next...

Oh God, is this from your experience? You got me captivated. I also have some issues with my mother, but I haven't really thought of going anywhere because of my sisters whom I am supporting. I love the courage though, but I hope you'll find it in your heart to forgive and forget someday...

Oh thank you vish :p it's really kind of a last-minute thing..so I think it's not that good, at least the way that I've written it... And thank you for giving me the encouragement to finish it anyway! :D

yes that's true lizjay...but I'm comforted by the fact that with these incidents, although not good, comes the genuine assistance from people over the world...just like what happened here, and what is happening now in nepal...it's just so heart-warming...

I wonder how you two became such great enemies lol :D :D Great job abby!

I love this story, I love Ian. And I think he wasn't a coward, he was brave enough to stand for his principle, and he was even braver when he stood up for Yani. Nice one!

I like the story...but oh it was just a dream :D

Will they ever see each other again? Is there more to the story? :p

thank God you liked it :D I'm just not too confident with how I've written it though... thank you dear!

yeah, I like the lesson :) although I agree with steven, there are grammar mistakes, which can easily be edited anyway..keep up the good work!

I've read stories about this custom of other countries. I just think they're robbing their children of the future they are supposed to have. No country would grow with this kind of thinking.

thanks Mahoobee :p although I don't know if I've given justice to the story :)

It broke my heart vish :( Especially that we are girls! But then, we really can't tell with other cultures. Still, we should be proud of us girls!

Oh, I think I don't want to be pretty if I'd be like her :) I would prefer my old me :D Nice lesson!

Very well-written! Deserves to be noticed! I would love to know what happened to him after the assault though :D

yeah, dogs or puppies or whatever animals are more than animals :) Good thing she still loves rohsela!

Oh, thank you Natasha :D what a wonderful comment from you...Have you written anything so far?