Good Work Mack!! I loved the way you took it till the last word rhyming impeccably

Thankyou MackDonnut !!! Sorry for being late.... i was out of typotic for a while :)

Thankyou girl !!! I was out of typotic for a while..... just came to see your new work today,,, just wonderful :)

Thankyouuuu.....by the way, sorry for the late reply,,, i was out for a while :)

Ha Ha.....I love to read scary things :D

U are most welcome

Thankyou chechiiee.....Thanks a lot for the lovely comment and for upvoting....I am so much obliged :)

Oweeee.....Thankyou soooo much dear friend.....you made my day :) Yey....wish you a happy scary Halloweeennnn :D

Thankyou Sharmishtha....Thanks a lot for the lovely comment and the upvote :)

Thankyou so much friend :) Yeah, my mumma too told the same that I have left a loophole for a climax-guess......great you guessed it right :D I will try to make it better in my next one :)

I liked your style of writing...Good Work :)

Scary....creepy....Godd!!! You scared me out.....that is nice piece of work :)

Quite a wonderful piece of writing !!!! I liked the title.....No words... a beautiful one Keep going

Creepy and Scary....You just heated up the story till the end...Loved your style of writing

Good Work ...Keep going :)

A beautifully written combination of emotions....fear, love, care, scary....ahhh every thing....just a perfect writing Sheela Chechy :) Loved it

Creepy....scaryyyyyyyy.....beautifully written.....Good Work :)

Nice plot and a wonderful narration :) I too use to have nightmares :D Thank God, after all it is safe ended ;)

Scary and Creepy.......i just liked it. This is a well narrated piece :)

Supernatural !!! Nicely written....i liked the plot though i got confused somewhere

Nuuupurrrr,,,,,,,that is wonderful story....just remarkable narration :) Between, I too use to have the same kind of weird dreams.....I could coorelate so easily :D Simply loved it

Indeed a creepy Halloween Story!!! Good Work

Hey crystal clear, that is a good piece of work :) Loved the title and the end... Just keep going :)

The plot was good but yet a bit confusing.....Keep going :)

That is a nicely written story Vishnu :) Well done girl.....Just keep going :)

That was a wonderful read dear :)

You are welcome :)