Rekha ..i loved your poem very much..yeah . For a change it is good to stay alone .but the romance and the newness wears away when you realize that you have no hands waiting to hold you or no lips waiting to speak to you..when you look out in to the world ..all that you see would be togetherness..leaves clustered to jiggle ..birds pecking.. domestic animals fighting or running around ..wherever you look you see doubles..and you are alone..sob sob .. Your poem is good but the idea is a bit heavy for me to contain..

Thanks friend

Thanks manahil naik

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Thanks Sharmishtha

CONGRATULATIONS..FRIEND

Congratulations friend

Thanks dear Velantra for that genuine thought and appreciation...

The inferno sounds a better option..it was grotesque. .what an imagination. .good in a perverted way.

You are welcome dear

Thanks a lot for your lovely comment ..whispering waters

Hi friend..it was creepy .a familar sounnding plot.but you made it interesting and extraordinary with your narration..congrats..

Friend..it was Indeed a fabulous one with a surprise ending ..I enjoyed it thoroughly

Thanks Vishnumaya...yeah haloween day and scary feel go hand in hand..but in my story the climax does the trick

An eerie feel creeps in when reading the story..that is the success of the writer..well done

That was a scary one turned happy..but you could really build a tempo with your writing..good work.

Thanks a lot for your lovely comment beena

you should have worked on the plot a little more .then the effect would have been chilling. still it is an assorted terror..good one

thanks a lot krishnabal

good one .but a little childish. Still I felt Goosebumps reading it all...gripping

thanks friend

thanks krishna

Nupur ..my thoughts on your story were kind of lighthearted and whimsical before I knew it was all a dream..After knowing that the ferocity were all but a dream, brought a smile in to my face..well narrated and captivating too

Thanks a lot nupur for reading and appreciating

Thanks a lot Sharmishtha..

A different treatment that turned out to be so striking...good one

An eerie feel is something we often experience when we are alone .but to weave a story equally eerie from imagination is a wonderful fête. you have succeeded in that hands down.well done friend