No it was just a honest response:-)

Wow

What happens next ? :-)

Inspiring!

Sad yet positive. Interesting !

Nice if slightly depressing :-) I guess its the winter

Awesome!

Nicely written. Though topic is not so nice. So maybe we can expect something lighthearted????:-)

Very true

Thanks a lot Khamil. Your encouragement keeps me going

Thanks dear!:-)

Nice!

Waiting for the rest... :-)

Quite normal I think. The article I posted just now - I wrote while writing something totally different. I just felt like writing about life and hence wrote this piece

The title itself is so catchy. Beautifully written as usual.

Something different. Liking it

Hmm... Graphic!

Great!

Wonderfully described. It's like a movie playing in my imagination

Lovely feel good poem!

I agree with Dahmie, the ending is kind of abtruse

Yes liked your writing. Story is a bit abrupt for me

Why did Steve go homeless? Loved your writing style!

Waiting for the rest of the story. Keep writing

Ha ha . Nice one!

Congratulations for writing the book.will buy if available as ebook. Looking forward to the extract

Very sad.