Sweet little story. Do you really have a brother?

Why was the child buried in the floor? Last line was a bit confusing

Excellent work!

Yes it is confusing. May be you can use more words to describe better. Beginning was exciting and good

Thanks Shyamasree for your encouragement

I like your sense of humour - cute story

Nice - I think all writers feel like this at one point or other....

Your words gave me so much joy..... Joy ;-)

Thanks Nupur - yours were also too good!

Thanks Celestialmind. Divine comment ;-) Made my day!

Thanks Velantra

Thanks Joseph

Thanks a lot Sudarshan - your praise means a lot!

Love your reply!

You did so it is a success ! I will get over it though

Rakhi you could have made it longer! It ended too soon!

She sounds like a girl with a lot of character!

Well written!

Feel good after reading this

I would not like to read this in the night as I might get nightmares! Well written

Nicely written - one feels sorry for that old man! But not too scary - just the way I like it!

The writing style is great and the pain is described realistically.

Scary story - would feel scared to go on any expeditions now! The twist on the asylum part was also good

Chilling twist - good build up on the horror part. You feel something horrible is going to happen and it does in the end!

Nice twist in the end - well written.

Good one Nupur - I like your style of writing - seems like you are addressing the audience directly. Excellent work

Very innovative use of a scarf!